An Exchange Of Gifts

November 2, 2009

Lately, I’ve been thinking of my life and the people in it as gifts.  I love this poem because it shows that a poet never extinguishes her pen-not even in death:

 An Exchange of Gifts

As long as you read this poem

I will be writing it.

I am writing it here and now

before your eyes,

although you can’t see me.

Perhaps you’ll dismiss this

as a verbal trick

the joke is you’re wrong;

the real trick

is your pretending

this is something

fixed and solid,

external to us both.

I tell you better:

I will keep on

writing this poem for you

even after I’m dead.

by Alden Nowlan

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  • 1. poeticgrin  |  November 2, 2009 at 5:46 pm

    Is it egotistical of me to admit that this is one reason I write? Immortality is alluring. “As long as you read this poem/I will be writing it.” Great poem! Glad you shared.

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    • 2. Carolina Maine  |  November 4, 2009 at 9:06 pm

      No way! We all want to live without death-so nothing egotistical there. I hope you are doing well! Congrats on your publications…I need to check back on your blog.

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  • 3. Doraz  |  November 2, 2009 at 6:44 pm

    I also felt the message in this poem! :)

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  • 5. Catherine Sherman  |  November 2, 2009 at 7:14 pm

    I agree with poeticgrin, Doraz and you. Words can be immortal. Early on, I realized that when we read the words of those who are dead they still live.

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  • 6. Darren King  |  November 3, 2009 at 12:16 am

    Carolina, I love this poem. Structurally and the content, it’s just the style of poem I’m drawn to…you’re so great. I just appreciate all you do here and in the world :) thanks, Darren.

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    • 7. Carolina Maine  |  November 4, 2009 at 9:08 pm

      @ Catherine-that is so true! I’ve always wanted to leave journals for my girls, but I am just not disciplined enough for it. @ Darren–thanks! This poem just jumped out at me–and I had to post it :)

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  • 8. Doraz  |  November 10, 2009 at 12:51 am

    Everything ok? I come by, but maybe you are on vacation! Have a great week! :)

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