Song of the Ill by Marcin Swietlicki

May 16, 2009

I slept through all the carnival, delirious.

I couldn’t bear the drums, pipes, burning puppets.

Today, the carnival’s over,

postmodernism begins.

I fiddle with the radio.  This archetypal

scan of the wavelength can be performed

ad infinitum.  Inside me

I have a little God, I tend

 

this scrap,

scab.

Translated from the Polish by Elzbieta Wojcik-Leese

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  • 1. poeticgrin  |  May 16, 2009 at 8:56 pm

    Oh wow, I am woefully ignorant of translations so I can only comment on this as I would any other poem (without taking the translation into account).

    I am a massive fan of short poems that pack a subtle punch, and this one does just that… a subtle kick, perhaps like that of the “little God” inside her, if I am interpreting correctly. Then I read it a second time and come away with a completely different interpretation, the “little God” being the only good part of the speaker left, a spirit that she picks at like a scab. Whether the “little God” is a baby or a reference to some spiritual/light/good side of the speaker doesn’t matter because I read the poem both ways and love both.

    Really, really good.

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  • 2. poeticgrin  |  May 16, 2009 at 8:57 pm

    Meant to add that I’m curious as to other’s interpretations of this poem.

    Thanks for the introduction to more wonderful poets.

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