February 2, 2010

Snow

For Deborah

It began at midnight.  And certainly

the kitchen is the best place to sit,

even the kitchen of the sleepless.

It’s warm there, you cook yourself something, drink wine

and look out of the window at your friend eternity.

Why care whether birth or death are merely points

when life is not a straight line.

Why torment yourself eyeing the calendar

and wondering what is at stake.

Why confess you don’t have the money

to buy Saskia shoes?

And why brag

that you suffer more than others.

If there were no silence here

the snow would have dreamed it up.

You are alone.

Spare the gestures.  Nothing for show.

by Vladmir Holan

Translated from the Czech by Ian & Jarmila Milner

Editor’s Note:

I didn’t choose this poem for Deborah because she dwells on negatives-if anything-she is the most positive person I have ever met.  I mainly chose this poem because she didn’t want it to snow–and I hate snow.  Additionally, when it does snow and you can’t enjoy nature the way you want to–you stay indoors more–comfort yourself-and you (inwardly) face all aspects of your life–the good and the bad–and this happens–even to the most positive of people.

So–if it is snowing (for any of you)–enjoy the kitchen–and let the “important issues” of life–melt into your hot cocoa.

Carolina Maine

January 31, 2010

My New Editing & Writing Service

Today, I am opening my new editing and writing service.  The site is geared toward creative writers, professionals, and students.  I do need to make a few adjustments regarding Resume and Cover Letter writing (not editing), but the site is ready-otherwise.

To take a gander:

CAMA COPYEDITING & WRITING

The actual address is:

www.carolinamaine.com

I looked for editing and domain name options, but all the good ones I came up with were taken so I just used my name.

Let me know what you think!

I will resume publishing poetry here on Poet Verse on Monday, February 2, 2010.

Thanks for reading Poet Verse!

January 31, 2010

WIDOW

every day in the mirror i wonder if the bump will ever grow again.
and every time i look forward i get lost in what could have happened
or how it should have happened
and today i used the last of the bubble bath you gave me two years ago for christmas
wondering if i should hold on to it
i weep because you wouldn’t make a very good father, but you make a stellar husband,
because there wasn’t anything you wouldn’t do for me
except putting down the bottle.
and that is what keeps you from being a father
because no son of mine is going to smell booze and cigarettes and think of his dad.
and while i am doing more now than i ever did with you beside me, it is empty because you’re the only one who would be proud.
because you are the only one who thinks i’m nuts enough actually change the rules of universal grammar because of my unfounded hatred of chomsky
and because to see me of all people, me, who refers to everything as a thingy by the thingy would be hysterical, but just might make perfect sense.
and so i make my move forward, closer to my goal, the same one you were trying to steal from me,without having someone who is helping guide me or cheerleading me along, which leaves an awful hole.
and while i am glad our son doesn’t know your smell, it will always be spring to me.
you know i hate that you don’t know how to behave.
because you really seemed to love me. unconditionally.
i could throw out the empty container, because i know all i would have to do is ask you for another. And i don’t even care for the smell.
Maybe a bump will never appear again. But i know getting lost is no longer an option.

by Chelsea Lee

© 2010  Chelsea Lee Unauthorized Use Is Prohibited

Editor’s Note

Chelsea Lee Copyright 2009 Unauthorized Use Is Prohibited

Chelsea Lee is a contributing writer to Poet Verse.  Other posts of interest:

An Intimate Poem by Chelsea Lee

Moments by Chelsea Lee

Astoria, Queens.  July 2001 by Chelsea Lee

Chelsea Lee and Carolina Maine zombie extras in The Dead Can’t Dance

Zombie Extras!

January 28, 2010

A New Adventure

I am working on a website for my new writing and editing service.  I’m sorry for not being on Poet Verse as much; however, I should catch up on all messages and begin posting again by this weekend.

Thanks for reading Poet Verse in the meantime, and I look forward to interacting with you when I return.

Carolina Maine,

Editor of Poet Verse

January 22, 2010

Title, Title, please!

I am trying to title the book I have been working on for the past few months.  Originally, I thought to title it, A Mother Like Me, but now I am leaning more toward The World Within Me.

I experienced an illness that was caused by autoimmune thyroid disease.  While I would like to write about it openly now, I think I should keep the illness to my-self until the book is complete.  The reason?  Well–society is not so understanding and somewhat judgmental regarding the type of illness.

Let’s just say-it would be a nightmare to any human being.  Fortunately, in my case, I recovered with the simple requirement of taking thyroid hormone daily.  However, my illness taught me that some people suffer with similar symptoms and cannot recover; I feel a responsibility to share my story in hopes that they will receive better treatment from society at large.

I’m sorry I am being somewhat coy here-I would love to share openly–but truly-I think it is better for me to wait until the book is complete and ready for sale.

Given the information available–that the book is about my entire life and not just my life as a mother–which title are you leaning toward?

I would love your insight!

Have a fabulous writing day!

January 22, 2010

Aging

I read this poem and laughed hysterically.  I immediately thought of Doraz and her witty poetry.  So-to honor her fabulous humor, I shall post this:

Aging

Aging is an agony.

Just white hairs, I’d thought;

But now the teeth are falling out

And hearing is a sort

Of fought- off deafness, it seems nothing

That my hair is white.

And she looks at me, she looks at me,

My darling of the night,

as though some bitter cucumber

Were sullying her sight.

by Anonymous of the 16th century

Translated from the Korean by GraemeWilson

January 16, 2010

What’s Your Writing Rhythm?

I learned to read in rhythms; it is a long and boring story.  Writing my book, A Mother Like Me, has been painful, emotionally, in some areas and today, I got the idea to plug my earphones into my laptop and rock out to some of my favorite up-lifting songs.

So–what are your favorite writing rhythms?

Today-my theme song is Pocket Full Of Rock’s Song, “I’m Alive”.

I can’t help it–the song represents the capstone of what I have learned during my lifetime–that yes–I went through hell–but I’m alive–and thank G-d–it is a wonderful blessing!

Have a great writing day!

January 16, 2010

In The Garden Of Time And Destiny

In the garden of time and destiny, we have seen both

the autumn and the spring

We have seen both the time of joy and the time

of sorrow

Don’t be exceedingly proud, for in the tavern

of good fortune

We have seen one thousand drunks intoxicated

on pride

We have seen countless stone fortresses

in the land of worldly fame

And not one could withstand the exploding sigh

of a broken heart

We have seen a flood of tears from the people

of grief

With a roar we have seen the deluge engulf

one thousand homes of luck

We have seen countless swift riders

of this battlefield

Whose only remaining wealth is the life-taking

arrow of love’s sigh

We have seen many who are proud

of their high office

Who must one day wait on others, hands folded

by the door

Oh Nabi, we have seen many wine drinkers

at life’s party

Who have exchanged a cup full of their desires

for a beggar’s bowl

by Nabi (c. 1642-1712)

Translated from the Turkish by Walter Andrews, Mehmet Kalpakli, and Najaat Black

Editor’s Note:

This poem appeals to me on so many levels-especially with what is happening in Haiti right now.  We are fortunate to still be alive and we should keep hope that one day-all of us will find eternal peace on Earth and in heaven.

Carolina Maine

January 15, 2010

The Red Badge of Courage Quote

He felt that in this crisis his laws of life were useless.  Whatever he had learned of himself was here of no avail. He was an unknown quantity.

—Stephen Crane, The Red Badge of Courage

January 11, 2010

Blasphemy In A Rose Given

There’s always blasphemy in a rose given

When there’s no time for appropriate consummation

Like a flicker of a nearly extinguished candle flame

Departure with blood-stained petals only poetically reinforces

The death of love that was never real in occurrence

But rather- a delusion propagated by emotion’s  intellect deadening potion

Love is not a flower cut and shared

Denied its life-roots

Love is daily tending

From seed to sprout

From bud to pruning

Pruning that yields future buds and growth

To be enjoyed by both the rose bush and its care-taker

To be admired by passers-by

Roses don’t belong in vases

Regardless of how crystal, antiqued, or royal

Given in the haste of tumultuous emotion

Love is not a decaying flower-cut just for an occasion

Love is a thriving vine of thorns

Adorned with delicate buds and blooms

Severing love from its roots

Only allows for withering of what was once

splendid and holy.

by Carolina Maine © 2010 Unauthorized Use Is Prohibited

Editor’s Note

I know the imagery in this poem is common and perhaps banal.  I haven’t written poetically in  about a year and am trying to break away from my esoteric style.  Writing my book has helped me to focus on common language usage and to write in a less lofty manner–so I thought I would try to apply this to poetry as well.  I like the message of this poem; I’m just not sure that I actually like how it is written.

January 11, 2010

From The Willow Branches

And how were we able to sing

with the foreign foot on our heart,

among the dead abandoned in the piazzas

on the grass hard with ice, to the lament

of the boys’  lamb, to the black howl

of the mother who went to meet her son

crucified on the telegraph pole?

Our lyres too were hung, by vow,

from the willow branches;

they swayed lightly in the sad wind.

by Salvatore Quasimodo (1901-1968)

translated from the Italian by Michael Egan


January 10, 2010

Last Love

Love at the closing of our days

is apprehensive and very tender.

Glow brighter, brighter, farewell rays

of one last love in its evening splendor.

Blue shade takes half the world away:

through western clouds alone some light is slanted.

O tarry, O tarry, declining day,

enchantment, let me stay enchanted.

The blood runs thinner, yet the heart

remains as ever deep and tender.

O last belated love, thou art

a blend of joy and of hopeless surrender.

by Vladimir Nabokov

Editor’s Note

I don’t like Nabokov’s novel, Lolita, and I am the furthest thing possible from a fan of his, but I very much liked and appreciated this poem.

January 10, 2010

Serenity

Serenity is joy without color

Unlike joy-it is of a neutral hue

Taking on no vibrance or coldness

Serenity is peace without wake

A placid body of water

Far from stagnant

But, rather, conversely

Brimming with fullness and teeming with life.

by Carolina Maine

©  2010 Unauthorized use is prohibited

If you have been following Poet Verse for a while then you know I haven’t written poetry in a long while.  I quit writing after my Vermont Studio Center residency.  I’m not sure why.  I have only written one other poem (beside this one) since November 2009 and so it feels great to get something down on paper.  Tonight, I am watching, Something’s Gotta Give and it became limpid that I am avoiding finishing my book and I have also been avoiding writing poetry. I decided to break my pattern of avoidance by writing a brief poem tonight about my emotional state.  Serenity is a blessed emotion, and I am grateful to have experienced it this night.

Good night, and enjoy your writing!

January 9, 2010

If Hot Flowers Come To The Street

Red cassia flowers

are a forest fire,

or so they say.

It’s an April event

called a summer fire.

Anarchy in green.

An explosion of buds.

Fire in the snow.

On the head of Lord Shiva

of the snow mountains

there are red matted locks,

gleaming cassia flowers,

and the Ganga.

In his red hand,

fire,

a small drum,

a deer.

And a snake at his throat.

That snake

won’t strike the deer.

The fire in his hand

won’t burn the Ganga.

But in our street

even flies

will swarm to hot flowers.

by R. Meenakshi (b. 1944)

Translated from the Tamil by Martha Ann Selby

Editor’s Note,

This has to be one of  the best translated poems ever featured here on Poet Verse.  I love the imagery, brevity, and energy of this poem.

January 9, 2010

From Hymns In Darkness

I met a man once

who had wasted half his life,

partly in exile from himself,

partly in a prison of his own making.

An energetic man, an active man.

I liked his spirit

and saw no hope for him.

Yet, he had the common touch;

he could, for instance, work with his hands.

To others, all attentive.

To his own needs, indifferent.

A tireless social human being,

destined always

to know defeat

like a twin-brother.

I saw him cheerful

in the universal darkness

as I stood grimly

in my little light.

by Nissim Ezekiel (b. 1924)

Indian Poet Who Wrote In English


January 6, 2010

Submissions To Poet Verse

Update January 7, 2010-There has been a misunderstanding regarding this post.  PV has been receiving poetry by comment and not by formal email submission.  In addition-the posts were high in number and an argument arose as to the authorship.  To prevent future problems, I wrote this post to clarify the poetry submission process.  I am currently accepting  poems by email at

poetverse at gmail dot com

I will make a selection from the poems available for publication by February.

I hope this clears up why this post was written.


Poet Verse takes submissions for poetry and will publish poems periodically.  I like to do this as it highlights other talented writers and their blogs (if they have one).

Please follow ALL GUIDELINES under the Submissions tab.

I do not take submissions by comment-nor have I ever.

Poet Verse also relies on the credibility of writers who send in their work and is not responsible for publishing work that has been “stolen”-for any reason.

Please don’t waste my time.  I love blogging about poetry and reading the poetry of others-but I’m not going to get involved in your personal disputes regarding what poem belongs to whom.

Thanks,

Carolina Maine

Editor, of Poet Verse

January 3, 2010

Einstein And I Share A Brain?

Wow.  I just wrote this to a priest I share my thoughts with.  I send stuff I read about–this letter was on metaphysics and basically described how I thought G-d was not a being in a sense we think of a being as being, but rather–a law-a way of being–a HARMONY–that we choose to co-exist with or act against.

Awesome!

I love Einstein even more know that I read this today!!!

G-d doesn’t play dice–but He is the ultimate mathematician regarding calculated possible outcomes.

Einstein is said to have held a concept of God similar to that promulgated by Jewish philosopher Baruch Spinoza. Einstein studied Spinoza and identified with Spinoza both culturally and philosophically. The Encyclopedia Britannica says of him: “Firmly denying atheism, Einstein expressed a belief in ‘Spinoza’s God who reveals himself in the harmony of what exists.’ This actually motivated his interest in science, as he once remarked to a young physicist: ‘I want to know how God created this world, I am not interested in this or that phenomenon, in the spectrum of this or that element. I want to know His thoughts, the rest are details.’ Einstein’s famous epithet on the ‘uncertainty principle’ was ‘God does not play dice.’”

Adherents

January 3, 2010

Einstein On Religion

“Science without religion is lame, religion without science is blind.”

–Albert Einstein

January 3, 2010

Kahlil Gibran’s Jesus Fails

I have loved Kahlil Gibran since my teen years when I first read The Prophet. I wasn’t religious back then, but I admired the fluidity and authority of Gibran’s writing.

I was excited to find his work, Jesus The Son Of Man: his words and deeds as told and recorded by those who knew him.

Reading it-well-that was a disappointment.

I don’t like the tone, and I don’t enjoy the methods he used to depict various people whom he constructed to meet Christ-or speak about Him.

For instance,  in “Mannus The Pompeiian To A Greek”, he writes

And Jesus, the man who revealed God as a being of joy, they tortured Him, and then put Him to death.  Page 133

He also writes that Christians focus on Jesus’ death instead of his mirth and joy

Even Jesus’ friends and disciples who knew His mirth and heard His laughter, make an image of His sorrow, and the worship that image. And in such worship, they rise not to their deity; they only bring their deity down to themselves.  Page 133

I understand that Mannus is talking to a Greek-the Greeks and Romans built temples to their gods and reveled in pleasure and delight-they weren’t concerned with wearing sack cloths on their heads-as Gibran notes earlier on page 133. Gibran on page 134  also notes the slaying of Adonis and the death of Socrates and how even Greeks focus on the slaying of their gods and wise men.

Jesus was not a man of mirth and joy.  In fact, he was serene, thoughtful, deliberate, patient, and just-and in those qualities-he exhibited and experienced PEACE.

The Jews did not torture Jesus-they were ignorant of His being because of their loyalty to the Covenant they shared with G-d and that is why Jesus forgave them, the Romans, and all others–because they did not understand what they were doing.

This is just one of the poems that I did not like.

I really didn’t enjoy the lusty, strange take on Mary Magdalen at the first of the book either.  His attempts to use lust to convey something pure fail and they fail Mary Magdalen’s nature.

I could go on and on.

Gibran spent a lot of time criticizing faithful people, unfaithful people–people in general.

Though The Prophet was brilliant, and I enjoyed his collection The Treasury of Kahlil Gibran, I would not recommend Jesus The Son of Man. It is boring, full of contrived imagery and generic assumptions about people and groups in history.

I cannot express my disappointment accurately-forgive me…

January 2, 2010

The Body Of Man

The body of man is like a flicker of lightning

existing only to return to Nothingness.

Like the spring growth that shrivels in autumn.

Waste no thought on the process for it has not purpose,

coming and going like the dew.

by Van Hanhn (d. 1018) The Rise Of The Vernacular Period

Translated from the Vietnamese by Nguyen Ngoe Bich with W.S. Merwin

Editor’s Note:

During my atheist period-when I rejected that a G-d could exist, I believed pretty much what this poem depicts.

It isn’t that I grew depressed thinking that there was no point to life-it is just that I observed that all bodies in space and on earth affect their environments to elicit a change or act as catalysts of change-and that change has a purpose to produce other changes-so therefore-I could not believe human life was without purpose. I don’t believe that  a flower has to think of a purpose to have one-it serves bees, other animals, to beautify the world of higher intelligence creatures…for instance.

January 2, 2010

Singing A New Resolution

Public speaking and singing have always been difficult for me.  I began the poetry readings to help me concentrate and not sound like Jack Nicholson in As Good As It Gets before he answers the phone-yes-I do that.

I normally don’t sing in mass.  Sometimes I do if the music is really loud because I know my voice will not carry.

I mainly sing in my car-that is where I rock out–my poor kids:(

Anyway-tonight I decided to upload a You Tube video of me singing “Good King Wenceslas”.  I remember rhythms easily; I do not remember lyrics well–so that is why I am looking down all the time.

Watching my video and then watching Charlotte Church saved in my favorites is probably the most humbling thing ever.  She has an amazing voice.  If I had a voice like hers-I would sing all of the time!

If you don’t mind rhythmic screeching-this video is for you!

I decided that this year–I would try to be less fearful of public speaking and singing–as we only have one life to live–let us sing and be merry!

January 2, 2010

Fan Me On Facebook

You can now be a Poet Verse fan on Facebook-just check out the widget in the right column.

I thought it would be fun–perhaps silly–but fun.

Hope to see you there!

January 1, 2010

My Country Weeps

We are finished, yet still

                  they have not finished with us.

Brazen troops of nations,

                   crazed trumpets,

blood-slick sword

                     and the big howitzer

have devoured everything that sweat

                     and diligence laid away.

Towers flicker, the cathedral

                   lies through the floor;

city hall sits in terror,

                 our forces smashed,

girls defiled,

               and wherever we turn

flames, plague, and mortality

                pierce heart and spirit.

Trench and street are the constantly

                refreshed conduits of blood.

For eighteen yeas now

               our rivers have

brimmed with corpses, slowly

                  pushing themselves clear.

Yet still I have said nothing

                    of what vexes like death

and dips a lashing beak deeper

                      than hunger, pest, and holocaust:

that so much treasure has been

                       plundered from our souls.

by  Andreas Gryphius (1616-1664) of Germany

Translated from the German from John Peck

 Editor’s Note:

I chose this poem specifically for New Year’s Day because it highlights the pain and trauma of war-no matter which country is devastated–war creates a loss of precious humanity.

May 2010 and those following be years in which humanity chooses a more diplomatic solution to international differences.

December 31, 2009

All The Teeth I Ever Had Are Worn Down

Abu’ abdulla Ja’far bin Mahud Rudaki of Samarkand says:

All the teeth I ever had are worn down and fallen out.

They were not rotten teeth, they shone like a lamp,

a row of silvery-white pearls set in coral;

they were as the morning star and as drops of rain.

There are none left now, all of them wore out and fell out.

Was it ill-luck, ill-luck, a malign of conjunction?

It was no fault of stars, nor yet length of years.

I will tell you what it was:  it was G-d’s decree.

The world is always like a round, rolling eye,

round and rolling since it existed:  a cure for pain

and then again a pain that supplants the cure.

In a certain time it makes new things old,

in a certain time makes new what was worn threadbare.

Many a broken desert has been gay garden,

many gay gardens grow where there used to be desert.

What can you know, my blackhaired beauty,

what I was like in the old days

You tickle your lover with your curls.

The days are past when his face was good to look on,

the days are past when his hair was jet black.

Likewise, comeliness of guests and friends was dear,

but one dear guest will never return.

Many a beauty may you have marvelled at

but I was always marvelling at her beauty.

The days are past when she was glad and gay

and overflowing with mirth and I was afraid of losing her.

He paid, your lover, well and in counted coin

in any town where was a girl with round hard breasts,

and plenty of good girls had a fancy for him

and came by night but by day dare not

for dread of the husband and the jail.

Bright wine and sight of a gracious face,

dear it might cost, but always cheap to me.

My purse was my heart, my heart bursting with words,

and the title-page of my book was Love and Poetry.

Happy was I, not understanding grief,

any more than a meadow.

Silk-soft has poetry made many a heart

stone before and heavy as an anvil.

Eyes turned always towards little nimble curls,

ears turned always towards men wise in words,

neither household, wife, child nor a patron–

at ease of these trials and at rest!

Oh! my dear, you look at Radaki

but never saw him in the days when he was like that.

Never saw him when he used to go about

singing his songs as though he had a thousand.

the days are past when bold men sought his company,

the days are past when he managed affairs of princes,

the days are past when all wrote down his verses,

the days are past when he was the Poet of Khorassan.

Wherever there was a gentleman of renown

in his house had I silver and a mount.

From whomsoever some had greatness and gifts,

greatness and gifts had I from the house of Saman.

The Prince of Khorassan gave me forty thousand dirhems,

Prince Makan more by a fifth,

and eight thousand in all from his nobles

severally.  That was the fine time!

When the Prince heard a fair phrase he gave, and his men,

each man of his nobles, as much as the Prince saw fit.

Times have changed.  I have changed.  Bring me my stick.

Now the beggar’s staff and wallet.

by Rudaki (c. 920) Period of the Rise of the Vernacular

Translated from the Persian by Basil Bunting

December 31, 2009

In Bed We Laugh, In Bed We Cry

In bed we laugh, in bed we cry;

And, born in bed, in bed we die.

The near approach a bed may show

Of human bliss to human woe.

by Isaac De Benserade (c. 1650)

Translated from the French by Samuel Johnson

Editor’s Note

I chose this poem because, on this particular night, it appealed to me.


December 31, 2009

Blog Highlight

If you are a continuous reader of Poet Verse then you know I regularly highlight blogs that are noteworthy.

The blog I have chosen for this post is much-needed in our fear-based society toward Muslims.  I admit, I  become angry when I see an act of terrorism on television and fear that it will happen to my family, friends, or someone else’s family and loved ones.  Life was created by G-d for us to enjoy-not for us to squander away in fear and fighting.

To combat my anger, I usually say a prayer for those who calculate to harm others to have a change of heart and reconsider their plans. It helps me as I feel like I am doing some good and I hope that it does the people in question some good and brings them peace rather than the frustration and anger that leads them to make such heinous plots and attacks against other human beings.

Kashif’s blog is intelligent, focused, and respectful.  Sometimes reading thoughts from such a person helps us also to remember the humanity of people of other faiths.

Check his blog out when you have the time:

Click:

Kashif

December 31, 2009

Compromise

Whenever I kissed her,

the smell of cigarettes filled my nostrils.

I’ve always thought of smoking as a vice,

but now I’m used to it,

it’s a part of me.

She too has got used to my stained teeth.

Whenever we meet, we become strangers to words,

only our breathing, sweat, and loneliness

fill the room.

Maybe our souls are dead,

our senses have run dry,

or this story’s repeated over and over again:

life’s always going through the pangs of birth,

new messiahs come and go to the cross,

a dusty man in the back rows

pushes his way to the front,

climbs the pulpit, and says,

‘The crucified man was ours!

His blood is our heritage!’

Then he swallows all the ideals,

all that had caused calumny,

and spits them out as commentaries

and interpretations,

the last resort of hopeless people,

maybe all people

I look for the ideal man in vain.

People dream and ride in the high winds,

then reach a stage when they weep bitterly

and break like branches.

They find loved ones,

who’re the focus of their desires and lives,

then come to hate them

even while loving them still.

I hate her, she despises me.

But when we meet

in the loneliness, the darkness,

we become one, like a lump of kneaded clay,

hatred leaves, silence stays,

the silence that covered the earth

after it was created,

and we go on breaking

like branches.

We don’t talk about the dreams we once dreamt,

we don’t talk about joys,

we simply go on breaking.

I’m fond of drinking,

she’s addicted to smoking,

wrapped in a sheet of silence we cling to each other,

we go on breaking

like tender branches.

by Akhtar-ul-Iman (b. 1915)

Translated from the Urdu by C.M Naim and Vinay Dharwadker (after Gopi Chand Narang and David Paul Douglas, and Adil Jussawalla and Akbtar-ul-Iman

Editor’s Note

I chose this poem because it reminds me deeply of my marriage .  In fact, I am going to look into adding this to my book manuscript.

December 30, 2009

Apathy Is Ascribed To The Modest Man

Apathy is ascribed to the modest man,

Fraud to the devout,

Hypocrisy to the pure,

Cruelty to the hero,

Hostility to the anchorite,

Fawning to the courteous man,

Arrogance to the majestic,

Garrulity to the eloquent,

Impotence to the faithful.

Does there exist any virtue

Which escapes

The slander of wicked men?

By Bhartrihari (c. 650) PostClassical Period

Translated from the Sanskrit by Barbara Stoler Miller

Editor’s note,

We often do not read ancient, world poetry as we think it isn’t relevant today.  However, as I read this poem I realized how profound Bhartrihari’s message is in our modern world.  How often do we cut others down for the virtues we have not mastered? We overlook that- even those more perfect in virtues than we-  they are human and will not be steadily perfect;however, that does not mean we should attack them like wild beasts the one moment they show weakness.  We are human and are capable of compassion.

December 30, 2009

SUBMISSIONS TO POET VERSE FOR 2010

I will be accepting submissions to Poet Verse for 2010.  If you would like to be featured here on PV, please email your submission to:

poetverse at gmail dot com

I am open to poetry from all religious backgrounds-Christian, Hindu, Islamic….

I only ask that your submissions be peaceful and not derogatory toward other religious groups.

Of course, I will also strongly consider a wide variety of non-religious poetry (as Poet Verse mainly features this regularly).  Please do not send violent or overtly sexual poetry for consideration.

A short biography should be included; if you have a blog or website and your poem is published here-I will link back to your site.

If you would like to learn more about submissions to Poet Verse, please check out the Submissions link in the right-hand column.

Happy New Year!

**Now, you can subscribe to PV by email (to be notified of new posts)-look for the Subscribe link in the right-hand column.

December 29, 2009

Jesus Only Died For Christians?

I perused various poetry books this morning yet nothing lept out at me.  Perhaps I am in a mood incongruent with enjoying poetry?

I do think my mood is tarnished because of a comment I received on Poet Verse about the Roman Catholic Church being an untrue/false path to salvation.

A reminder to those who think Jesus only saved a few people by way of his crucifixion:

Jesus died and rose again for ALL OF HUMANITY.  Living a life in friendship with G-D on earth  is the most harmonious way to actually LIVE-that is what Jesus meant regarding  the only way to life was through Him.

WE ARE TO BE MERCIFUL AND PRAY FOR ALL OF HUMANITY EACH DAY AS THAT IS THE SACRIFICE JESUS MADE; HE DID NOT LOVE CHRISTIANS MORE BECAUSE THEY CHOSE TO KNOW HIM; HE LOVED US ALL AND FORGAVE OUR COLLECTIVE IGNORANCE.

So, today, I will forgive the ignorance of this person who does not know Christ, and I will pray that he actually know Christ in his life–so that he may grow in the ways of mercy, compassion, truth, and love.

Peace be with you all.

Carolina Maine, Editor

Extra note from Carolina Maine:

****When Adam and Eve fell from G-d’s grace–G-d wanted to severely punish them.  Archangel Michael felt compassion for them and asked G-d to be merciful and allow him to return to Adam and Eve and show them how to survive in their new world.

When Jesus commissions the 11 in Mark 16, Jesus was G-d incarnate and was directly trying to induce compassion in his apostles-Jesus wants us to be like Archangel Michael and Himself (for His sacrifice to all of Humanity-not a select few).  Jesus, himself, says many times that one needs eyes to see and ears to hear–are you not seeing and hearing him because your heart is hard?

December 23, 2009

Good King Wenceslas

When I was a little girl, I loved the Christmas Carol, “Good King Wenceslas”.  I had no idea what it was about, but I thought it was one of the best Christmas songs ever.

Today, I would like to share the lyrics of “Good King Wenceslas” and if I am able to find a good You Tube version-it will also be featured.

The history of  King Wenceslas can be found here:  History

I had no idea, as a child, that he was a Catholic martyr. After I was baptized and confirmed, I discovered this fact-a few months ago and-it kind of felt special as I remember being drawn to this carol as a young girl–as if the Spirit was working through the song and his example in life on how a good Christian should conduct him or herself.

Lyrics for “Good King Wenceslas”

Good King Wenceslas looked out
on the feast of Stephen,
when the snow lay round about,
deep and crisp and even.
Brightly shown the moon that night,
though the frost was cruel,
when a poor man came in sight,
gathering winter fuel.

Hither, page, and stand by me.
If thou know it telling:
yonder peasant, who is he?
Where and what his dwelling?
Sire, he lives a good league hence,
underneath the mountain,
right against the forest fence
by Saint Agnes fountain.

Bring me flesh, and bring me wine.
Bring me pine logs hither.
Thou and I will see him dine
when we bear the thither.
Page and monarch, forth they went,
forth they went together
through the rude wind’s wild lament
and the bitter weather.

Sire, the night is darker now,
and the wind blows stronger.
Fails my heart, I know not how.
I can go no longer.
Ark my footsteps my good page,
tread thou in them boldly:
Thou shalt find the winter’s rage
freeze thy blood less coldly.

In his master’s step he trod,
where the snow lay dented.
Heat was in the very sod
which the saint had printed.
Therefore, Christian men, be sure,
wealth or rank possessing,
ye who now will bless the poor
shall yourselves find blessing

December 23, 2009

Carolina Maine on You Tube

There have been some questions regarding my channel on You Tube so if you would like to visit:

www.youtube.com/carolinamaine09

or you can just click: carolinamaine09

December 23, 2009

Self-Loathing

I wanted to post this earlier; however, I was not able to use my link dialogue box with Firefox and Explorer would not respond when opened–so–I am late in posting.

I found this poem on A Modern Hell, a blog by Christopher Zara, and thought his poem ” This Is Self- Loathing” was creative, and something we could all identify with in that all of us have moments of self-loathing.

Click ” This Is Self-Loathing”

to be taken to A Modern Hell.

December 21, 2009

Poetry Readings on You Tube

November 23, 2009

Book

I’m still working on my book, A Mother Like Me so I will not be online as much.  I will catch up to blogs once I have completed the manuscript and have prepared it for submission.  In the meantime, I will try to check in and post short poems daily.

Thanks for reading Poet Verse!

 

November 23, 2009

Horse

I’ve never seen a soul detached from its gender,

but I’d like to.  I’d like to see my own that way,

free of its female tethers.  Maybe it would be like

riding a horse.  The rider’s the human one, but

everyone looks at the horse.

By Chase Twichell

I like this poem.  It reminds me of myself-although-I have seen my soul without gender.  I see it that way daily.  I just wish others did as well-sometimes.

Carolina Maine

November 18, 2009

EVENINGS

Veillees

It is rest full of light, neither fever nor languor, on the bed

      or on the road.

It is the friend, neither ardent nor timid.  The friend.

It is the loved one, the fond, neither tormenting nor tormented.  The loved one.

The air and the world all unexplored.  Life.

-Was it then this?

-And the dream breaks afresh.

by Arthur Rimbaud

Translated from the French by Vernon Watkins

*I love this poem as it reminds me of the intimacy I feel regarding G-d.  Various saints had flaming, ardent love, but-I don’t have that kind of love.  I’m not sure why.  I suppose it really doesn’t matter-I am comfortable with a tiny seed of intimacy-as one feels with a beloved friend.

–Carolina Maine

November 18, 2009

The Disappearances

“Where is it one first heard of the truth?”

On a day like any other day,

like “yesterday or centuries before,”

in a town with the one remembered street,

shaded by the buckeye and the sycamore-

the street long and true as a theorem,

the day like yesterday or the day before,

the street you walked down centuries before-

the story came as others flooding in

from the cardinal points is

turning to take a good look at you.

Every creature, intelligent or not, has disappeared-

the humans, phosphorescent,

the duplicating pets, the guppies and spaniels,

the Woolworth’s turtle that cost forty-nine cents

(with the soiled price tag half-peeled on its shell)-

but from the look of things, it only just happened.

The wheels of the upside-down tricycle are spinning.

The swings are empty but swinging.

And the shadow is still there, and there

is the object that made it,

riding the proximate atmosphere,

oblong and illustrious above

the dispeopled bedroom community,

venting the memories of those it took,

their corrosive human element.

This is what you have to walk through to escape,

transparent but alive as coal dust.

This is what you have to hack through,

bamboo-tough and thickly clustered.

The myths are somewhere else, but here are the meanings,

and you have to breathe them in

until they burn your throat

and peck at your brain with their intoxicated teeth.

This is you as seen by them, from the corner of an eye

(was that they way you were always seen?).

This is you when the President died

(the day is brilliant and cold).

This is you picking a ground-wasps’ nest.

this is you at the doorway, unobserved,

while your aunts and uncles keen over the body.

This is your first river, your first planetarium, your first popsicle.

The cold and brilliant day in six-color prints-

but the people on the screen are black and white.

Your friend’s mother is saying,

Hush children!  Don’t you understand history is being made?

You do, and you still do.  Made and made again.

This is you as seen by them, and them as seen by you,

and you as seen by you, in five dimensions,

in seven, in three again, then two,

then reduced to a dimensionless point

in a universe where the only constant is the speed of light.

This is you at the speed of light.

by Vijay Sheshadri

November 10, 2009

Writing A Book

I’m writing a book and will be offline for a few weeks.

Sorry I haven’t been posting.

Thanks for reading!

 

November 2, 2009

An Exchange Of Gifts

Lately, I’ve been thinking of my life and the people in it as gifts.  I love this poem because it shows that a poet never extinguishes her pen-not even in death:

 An Exchange of Gifts

As long as you read this poem

I will be writing it.

I am writing it here and now

before your eyes,

although you can’t see me.

Perhaps you’ll dismiss this

as a verbal trick

the joke is you’re wrong;

the real trick

is your pretending

this is something

fixed and solid,

external to us both.

I tell you better:

I will keep on

writing this poem for you

even after I’m dead.

by Alden Nowlan

November 1, 2009

Poem For The Dead

On All Souls Day, we remember those whom we have loved.  This poem-even its title indicating a beloved person who committed suicide-reminds me of my loved ones who have departed the earth.  My father and mother are still alive, but I always thought of my grandparents as parents because their values were the ones strong enough to pull me back to a good life- even after a youth of straying:

 Father, Mother, Robert Henley who hanged himself in the ninth grade, et al

I’ve sensed ghosts more than once,

      their presence

a kind of plucking from the memorious air.

 

Always they reveal themselves as lost,

       surviving

on what’s loose in me, some last words

I never said, some I did.  I’ve heard

          they can’t live

if fully embraced, if taken fully in,

 

yet I do nothing but listen to their

           wingless hovering,

the everything they never say.

 

If only I could give them what they need,

         no, if only

I could convince myself these things

 

must die as naturally as apples

         on the apple tree…

but that’s in Nature, which is never

wrong, just thoughtless and without shame.

by Stephen Dunn

October 31, 2009

Cemetery Nights!

Cemetery Nights

Sweet dreams, sweet memories, sweet taste of earth:

here’s how the dead pretend they’re still alive-

one drags up a chair, a lamp, unwraps

the newspaper from somebody’s garbage,

then sits holding the paper up to his face.

No matter if the lamp is busted and his eyes

have fallen out.  Or some of the others

group together in front of the TV, chuckling

and slapping what’s left of their knees.

No matter if the screen is dark.  Four more

sit at a table with glasses and plates,

lift forks to their mouths and chew.  No matter

if their plates are empty and they chew only air.

Two of the dead roll on the ground,

banging and rubbing their bodies together as if in love or frenzy.  No matter if their

 skin breaks off, that their genitals are just a memory.

 

The head cemetery rat calls in all the city rats,

who pay him what rats find valuable-

the wing of a pigeon or ear of a dog.

The rats perch on tombstones and the cheap statues of angels, and, oh they hold their bellies

and laugh, laugh until their guts half break;

while the stars give off the same cold light

that all these dead once planned their lives by,

and in someone’s yard a dog barks and barks

just to see if some animal as dumb as he is

will wake from sleep and perhaps bark back.

by Stephen Dobyns

BOO!!!  HAPPY HALLOWEEN!!

October 30, 2009

The Dead Walk Backwards

The imagery of the dead walking backwards reminds me of something my husband told me:

 When he was a little boy in Nepal ,one evening, he saw a man walking-but the man’s legs were actually backwards.  He was terrified and thought it was a ghost.  Spoooooooky, huh?

On Walking Backwards

My mother forbade us to walk backwards.  That is how the dead walk, she would say.  Where did she get this idea?  Perhaps from a bad translation.  The dead, after all, do not walk backwards but they do walk behind us.  They have no lungs and cannot call out but would love for us to turn around.  They are victims of love, many of them.

by Anne Carson

October 29, 2009

Sanctity

This poem was nestled among several vulgar poems with Christian themes, but in a way-I think it describes my feelings:

Sanctity

To be a poet and not know the trade,

To be a lover and repel all women (men);

Twin ironies by which great saints are made,

The agonizing pincer-jaws of Heaven.

by Patrick Kavanagh

October 29, 2009

Snow Pumpkins!

HAPPY HALLOWEEN!

Snow Pumpkins Carolina Maine Copyright 2009 Unauthorized Use Is Prohibited

October 28, 2009

My Zombie Photo

If you scroll down-you will see my post on being an extra in the movie, The Dead Can’t Dance-you can also view the trailer from a link in the post.

Here I am-well–what I looked like as a Zombie Extra: (The tan stuff had to dry on my forehead before blood could be added.)

**I’ve been having trouble with my photo uploads–I uploaded this again so it would be a decent size.

Carolina Maine and Chelsea Lee The Dead Can't Dance Copyright 2009 Unauthorized Use is Prohibited

October 28, 2009

Resurrection

“Resurrection” is powerful to me in that it depicts a man who is torn between two worlds.  On one hand Holan wants to be with G-d, but on the other-he is still very much tied to this world and the people he loves in it-for instance, his mother.  I also like how he chooses to live eternity as a child needing his mother’s care and attention–as it shows he values innocence.

Resurrection

Is it true that after this life of ours we shall one day be awakened by a terrifying clamour of trumpets?

Forgive me, God, but I console myself

that the beginning and resurrection of all of us dead

will simply be announced by the crowing of the cock.

 

After that we’ll remain lying down a while…

The first to get up

will be Mother…We’ll hear her

quietly laying the fire,

quietly putting the kettle on the stove

and cosily taking the teapot out of the cupboard.

We’ll be home once more.

by Vladmir Holan

translated from the Czech by George Theiner

October 28, 2009

It’s a Snow Day, Y’all

Note:  Some poems for the Halloween and All Souls Season will be posted starting today.

It is snowing here in CO.  Not a fan of snow.  I did all my shopping yesterday and food was still plentiful on the shelves.  This is a strange phenomenon.  I don’t do snow (driving, going outside…)–but it does look nice on trees:

Snow Carolina Maine Copyright 2009 Unauthorized Use Prohibited

Of course, I could have gotten a better shot, but I was in house shoes at the time :)

October 27, 2009

I’m An Extra Zombie

My friend, Chelsea Lee, dragged me to a movie audition in Wichita, Kansas for The Dead Can’t Dance.  I had so much fun!  I landed an extra zombie role, and Chelsea lucked out with a cool teacher zombie part.

The movie will be out soon–but here is the trailer: I’m in the second school hall scene–the brief flash of zombie with red forehead blood and limp wrists!

The Dead Can’t Dance

October 27, 2009

Poem I Wrote As A Teen

I wrote this poem when I was a teenager working on the Marina at Wind Creek State Park in Alexander City, Alabama.  I love being near water.  I love to fish.  Lakes, after a rainfall, are always mystical to me because they look different after being dimpled by rain droplets.  This poem depicts my love of the Lake-and all the evening strolls I would take after my work day had ended.

After-Shower Wander

Misty humid

Is the day

Colors smeared

Into tonal magnificent array

 

Lake of rain droplets dimpled design

Finds me strolling the banks with linen rolled knee-high

Mud of red that does bleed

From the southern ground-of mysterious intrigue

 

Into heart’s lull

I do escape

And find G-d’s breath

Stroking the down of my sensitive soul

 

In pool-eyed ecstasy

Do I wander

No irritation may drive asunder

The cohesive illumine of child-like wander.

I didn’t really believe in G-d at this point in my life.  I considered myself an Atheist, but I attended church youth group meetings in the evenings because I really loved the pastor and his wife-they are awesome people.  I mainly separated myself from G-d at this point because of things that were happening to me in my life.  However, nature was one area in which I could feel the presence of G-d in the Universe–and enjoying the beauty of the world-I guess was G-d’s way of coaxing me back to Him…or at least–getting me to acknowledge that He might actually exist.

 by Carolina Maine Copyright 1995 Unauthorized Use is Prohibited

October 26, 2009

Notes Of A Catholic Metaphysician Blog Now Private

I know I previously made my repository blog public, but since it covers information I plan to use in later works-I decided to set it to private.

If you are close to me and want access-give me your username and I will grant you access to my notes.

And if you aren’t a “regular” here on Poet Verse and are asking:

Why Metaphysics?

Metaphysics, the nature of reality, is something I am “good” at discerning given my predicaments in life and natural intellectual inclination to pursue it.

I also love Metaphysical Poetry.

October 26, 2009

Code For Fix Me= Mixed Metaphors

Have you ever worked on a poem or a manuscript and  found yourself unable to adequately express your feelings through the words needed for a sentence-but at the same time–your mind was working ahead of itself to complete other passages that would follow the sentence in question?

I have, and I find the experience annoying.

For instance, in my book manuscript, I wrote love at first sight (something to that effect) and head over heels in the SAME sentence.  Why?  I wanted to leave an imprint of how I felt–and basic cliche metaphors served as perfect place holders.  It is my little code to go back and work on expressing the thoughts/feelings the sentence is trying to convey.  Rough drafts, for me, have multiple little place holders–they scream FIX ME as I re-read my draft.  When I feel confident that I can fully articulate what I want to say-I remove the offending metaphors and insert proper prose or poetic statements.

Today-I thought I would expand on Mehta’s How to Write Poetry rule for Avoiding Mixed Metaphors Pages 39-40 by sharing how I use mixed cliche metaphors to serve as a Code for FIX ME.

Mixed metaphors include:  (Mehta’s example)

He really hit that hot potato out of the park.

His argument crescendoed as he hammered home his point.

He poured forth his story with his heart in his mouth.

Mehta suggests that mixed metaphors express carelessness and often create illogical, confusing, and sometimes contradictory images (39).

I totally agree!  And that is why I use them in my rough drafts when I need an emotional place holder–they are so ugly to me that I know I must go back and fix them.

I hope this helps in your writing endeavors this day!

October 26, 2009

Strawberry Milk and YouTube Don’t Mix

Seriously don’t mix.  I love scrawberries, and the only way I will drink milk is if chocolate or strawberry powder is mixed in with it.  The only problem?  Aside from the lactose intolerance issue–

It seems to make my throat clog up.  I was clearing my throat like a weird lady so I decided to just post my poem here–it was a short one anyway.

Background:

My grandmother told me that her little brother, Marx Wayne, died from inhaling a peanut; it caused pneumonia.  She said she had to tend to his body during the wake and that coins were used to keep the eyes closed–but that one could also use flower petals-so that inspired this poem:

**My cousin, Robyn Bianchi, just commented and told me that Marx’s middle name was actually Swain and that she and her mother, Lynn, had been saying it wrong-like I have been.  We’re southern-I guess we just spell like we hear.  Thanks, Robyn!!

DEATH

Where does death happen?

Does it happen in the skin-across which no more wind blows

Or does it happen in the soul-a crawl of internal to down below

 

Does it happen with petals stinging the eyes?

Or does it happen with internal salts causing them to cry?

 

DEATH

 

Why make it for more

It is what makes us lie down for prayer in adore.

–by Carolina Maine Copyright 2008 Unauthorized Use Is Prohibited

October 25, 2009

Poem For My Husband

I have atrocious penmanship.  On a good day, it is legible.  With many hours of practice, it can be beautiful-but that beauty is limited only to a small project-such as a short poem.  After I met my would-be husband, Kal, I thought of this poem and wrote it down on a flowery stationery note.  I kept it until our 10th year of marriage, but sadly, I don’t remember if I threw it out or if it was mixed in with some items that I gave to someone (the circumstances were not usual).

*I suppose it was Kal’s awkward syntax that first drew me to consider this poem as descriptive of my feelings toward him.

This poem is for my husband–as it fits my love and appreciation for him:

since feeling is first

 

 

since feeling is first
who pays any attention
to the syntax of things
will never wholly kiss you;

wholly to be a fool
while Spring is in the world

my blood approves,
and kisses are a better fate
than wisdom
lady (fella)  i swear by all flowers. Don’t cry
- the best gesture of my brain is less than
your eyelids’ flutter which says

we are for each other; then
laugh, leaning back in my arms
for life’s not a paragraph

And death i think is no parenthesis

 

 by e. e. cummings

October 25, 2009

New Art Posted

New art is posted on my daughter’s blog.  Meena is very much into art. You can also visit her blog by selecting the Meenart tab at the top of my blog.

Meenart

October 24, 2009

2 Day Internet Fast

I spent two days offline as a fast.  I do that whenever I think  I have been online too much.  Please excuse me for not approving your comments earlier.

All is well–and I am now back online!

** The video of “Dawn” irritates me because I pushed my hair over to one side…I keep thinking–I wish I could push it back over.  I didn’t get another take because my kiddies couldn’t stand being quiet for another five minutes–they were wild that night!

Tomorrow, I will post another YouTube poem.

October 19, 2009

Dawn, A Poem By Carolina Maine

October 16, 2009

The Apostacy

                              One Star

    Is better far

Than many Precious Stones:

One Sun, which is abov in Glory seen,

        Is worth ten thousand Golden Thrones:

A juicy Herb, or Spire of Grass,

In useful Virtu, native Green,

         An Em’rald doth surpass;

Hath in’t more Valu, tho less seen.

 

                            No Wars,

                Nor mortal Jars,

Nor bloody Feuds, nor Coin,

Nor Griefs which they occasion, saw I then;

          Nor wicked Thievs which this purloin:

          I had no Thoughts that were impure;

          Esteeming both Women and Men

                   God’s Work, I was secure,

And reckon’d Peace my choicest Gem.

 

                                     As Eve

                              I did believ

               My self in Eden set,

Affecting neither Gold, nor Ermin’d Crowns,

          No ought els that I need forget;

          No Mud did foul my limpid Streams,

          No Mist eclypst my Sun with frowns;

                        Set off with hev’nly Beams,

My joys were Meadows, Fields, and Towns.

 

                                        Those things

                              Which Cherubins

                   Did not at first behold

Among God’s Works, which Adam did not see;

         As Robes, and Stones enchas’d in Gold,

        Rich Cabinets, and such like fine

          Inventions could not ravish me:

                  I thought not of Bowls of Wine

              Needful for my Felicity.

 

                               All Bliss

                       Consists in this,

                To do as Adam did;

And not to know those superficial Joys

         Which were from him in Eden hid:

          Those little new-invented Things,

          Fine Lace and Silks, such as Childish Toys

                     As Ribbans are and Rings

Or worldly Pelf that Us destroys.

 

                                        For God

                                Both Great and Good,

                The seeds of Melancholy

Created not:  but only foolish Men

                  Grown mad with customary Folly

           Which doth increase their Wants, so dote

            As when they elder grow they then

                       Such Baubles chiefly note;

           More Fools at Twenty Years than Ten.

 

                                       But I,

                          I knew not why,

                    Did learn among them too

          At length; and when I once with blemisht Eys

                   Began their Pence and Toys to view,

                    Drown’d in their Customs, I became

                   A Stranger to the Shining Skies,

                                Lost as a dying Flame;

                   And Hobby-horses brought to prize.

 

                                            The Sun

                                   And Moon forgon,

                         As if unmade, appear

               No more to me; to God and Heven dead

                                I was, as tho they never were:

                              Upon some useless gaudy Book,

                             When I knew of God was fled,

                                    The Child being taught to look,

              His Soul was quickly murthered.

 

                                           O fine!

                            O most divine!

          O brave!  they cry’d; and shew’d

Som Tinsel thing whose Glittering did amaze,

          And to their Cries its beauty ow’d;

           Thus I on Riches, by degrees,

           Of a new Stamp did learn to gaze;

                    While all the World for these

        I lost; my joy turn’d to a Blaze.

by Thomas Traherne 1637-1674

The spellings in this poem are correct given their time period–even when it appears that I just left off a letter.

Reaction to “The Apostacy”:

1.  What message do you think Traherne was trying to send/convey?

2.  How do you feel about Traherne’s message and why?

October 15, 2009

Awesome Blog Awards

 

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If you enjoy humor, you will love Doraz’s blog, Believe in Yourself

For daily Biblical inspiration visit Kin at Good News To-Go

For fun artistic musings check out  KSeverny

These are great blogs-head their way!

Ha!  I forgot I could copy and paste this,  L. Doraz–where is my brain!?

October 15, 2009

Patience

I realized, after writing the post on Sadness, that perhaps I haven’t been as patient as I could be with other people.  I evolve each day in the “understanding” department-and I like to think others do as well.  I’m sure there are exceptions, but I try not to focus on them since they are an insignificant portion of the population.  I could be more patient with others; it reduces the stress of dealing with the meanness of some people

Just some quick thoughts for the day.

Thanks for the notes of encouragement-both on Poet Verse and by personal message.

October 14, 2009

Sadness

I’ve been offline from my blog because I have been sad lately.  I’m not exactly sure what is bothering me.  I know I feel conflicting emotions because I am intelligent yet mentally challenged.  I feel frustrated with people who say they believe in one thing and demonstrate that they believe the opposite.  I am tired of people being hateful and mean to those who have the misfortune of not being completely sound in mind.  I feel a responsibility to advocate for the aforementioned people who are less fortunate than me, but I feel trapped by my own now-reduced standing in society.

I know this makes no sense to those of you who are not close to me, but for those who are–you understand.

I haven’t felt like myself  for the past few days,and I’m tired.

I know it will pass-it always does.  It just stinks in the meantime.

Thanks,

Carolina Maine

**I will catch up to comments and posts tomorrow morning.

October 10, 2009

Blog Award

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You may have noticed some new additions to my blogroll lately. I have been having fun on the blogs I am awarding today! Each of them brings a smile to my face and warmth to my heart. If you have time, please go for a visit. Each of them have new insights into life. Well worth the visit to my new blogging friends at:

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Luisa Doraz

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October 8, 2009

Dr. Faustus

Today, I am re-reading an old childhood favorite story (play) titled The Tragicall Historie of Doctor Faustus (1604-1616) by Marlowe and edited by W.W. Greg.

I have felt like Dr. Faustus at certain points in my life and I always went back to my early childhood understanding of him so I decided-now that I am all “grown up” I will revisit the text to see how I respond and what I think regarding his view of the world and how that can pertain to science.

Metaphysical poetry has always been my favorite, and today, I was struck by the devil’s name, Mephostophilis, as well as the line, “These Metaphisicks of Magitians.” (Line  76 of  the B-1616 play text). (Line 79 of Text A-1604).

The most curious thing is that I already know the play and was more interested in the explanations of the play’s meanings at various scenes; however, the book is damaged.  Curiously, the text has double type that looks like botany and chemistry placed directly on top of the original text rendering the original text illegible.  Pages 33-48 cannot be read.

Odd.

These are just thoughts–ramblings based on today’s reading venture.

October 7, 2009

Quote For The Week

History is a nightmare from which I am trying to awake.

                                                                                                  —James Joyce, Ulysses

October 7, 2009

Let It Go

It is this deep blankness is the real thing strange.

     The more things happen to you the more you can’t

                   Tell or remember even what they were.

The contradictions cover such a range.

        The talk would talk and go so far aslant.

                          You don’t want madhouse and the whole thing there.

by Sir William Empson

I love this-reminds me of me and my life!

October 7, 2009

Departed Youth

What though the rosebuds from my cheek

Have faded all!  which once so sleek

Spoke youth, and joy, and careless thought.

By guilt, or fear, or shame uncaught,

My soul, uninjured, still hath youth,

Its lively sense attests the truth!

       Oh!  I can wander yet, and taste

The beauties of the flowery waste,

The nightingale’s deep swell can feel

Till to the eye a tear doth steal;

Rapt!  gaze upon the gem-decked night,

Or mark the clear moon’s gradual flight,

Whilst the bright river’s rippled wave

Repeats the quivering beams she gave.

     Nor yet does Painting strive in vain

To waken from its canvas plain

the lofty passions of the mind,

Or hint the sentiment refined:

The the sweet magic yet I bow,

As when youth decked my polished brow.

The chisel’s lightest touch to trace

Through the pure form, or softened grace,

Is lent me still; I still admire,

And kindle at the Poet’s fire–

      Why Time!  since these are left me still,

Of lesser thefts e’en taken they fill.

Yes, take all lustre from my eye,

And let the blithe carnation fly,

My tresses sprinkle o’er with snow,

That boasted once their auburn glow,

Break the slim form that was adored

By him so loved, my wedded lord;

But leave me, whilst all these you steal,

The mind to taste, the nerve to feel!

by Hannah Parkhouse Cowley

October 7, 2009

The Metaphysician Is In The House

While I am writing my book manuscript, I am also preparing to review material that will inspire my up-coming (next year), Metaphysics, collection.

Let’s hope I stay on task and not venture off into madness…LOL!  Euripides, here I come!

Background reading:

Doubt: a history The Great Doubters and Their Legacy of Innovation from Socrates and Jesus to Thomas Jefferson and Emily Dicksinson by Jennifer Michael Hecht

Skeptical Philosophy for Everyone by Richard H. Popkin and Avrum Stroll

The Philosophical Journey by William F. Lawhead

Metaphysics by Peter Van Inwagen

Oh, and it wouldn’t be complete without:

Marlowe’s Doctor Faustus 1604-1616 Parallel Texts Edited by W.W. Greg

October 6, 2009

Flaming Liberal!

It never ceases to amaze me how people react to the word, liberal, in only political terms.  Yes, liberal does pertain to politics, but as we all learned in elementary school–CONTEXT IS KEY.

If one uses the word liberal in a sentence or paragraph that does not contain political topics, one must assume that the context is of another slant:

Behold:

The non-political definitions of the word

LIBERAL

7. free from prejudice or bigotry (In my case, I married someone outside my family’s Christian tradition and someone outside my race-which is the context I was using when someone asked why I was bringing up politics…LOL!)

8. open-minded or tolerant (Evident in the fact that I respect other people’s use of free will to determine what they believe.)

9. characterized by generosity and willingness to give in large amounts:  a liberal donor  (If I had money-I would support plenty of projects to help people of all backgrounds.)

10.  given freely or abundantly; a liberal donation.

11.  not strict or rigorous; free

12.  of, pertaining to, or based on liberal arts

13.  of, pertaining to, or befitting a free man (Yes, my favorite-I changed my name to Carolina and one of the definitions is Latin from Carolus meaning free man.)

14.  a person of liberal principles or views, esp in politics or religion (One might find some awkwardness here in that I am Catholic.  Perhaps at one time Catholic was traditional–but now–it is very much a liberal choice to depart from what is now traditional…I don’t live according to archaic notions of modern/traditional–I live right now in the 21st Century.

Now–you have your Word of the Day!

Definition taken from Webster’s Encyclopedic Unabridged Dictionary Of The English Language

October 6, 2009

Soles of Blood and Sin You Tube

October 5, 2009

Symbolism-A Poet’s Best Friend

Symbolism can enhance poetry in a way that adds texture and depth.  In order to do it correctly, one needs to understand the ancient and modern definitions of symbols and practice weaving them into works without creating cliche images.

There are several symbolism dictionaries on the market, but the one I am using is pretty good and it isn’t very expensive.

Dictionary of Symbolism:  Cultural Icons and The Meanings Behind Them

By Hans Biedermann

Translated by James Hulbert

ISBN 0-452-01118-3

October 5, 2009

New Collection

The collection of poetry that I was working on last year and while at the Vermont Studio Center was a flop.  I didn’t even finish it. I had been warned that it would not work out, but I decided to try it a little longer anyway.  I don’t know what possessed me to fuse politics and poetry together, but the result was a “hot mess”.  Oh well.  It happens.

I think I’m back to my old style and way of being.  It took a little time off to realize that I should stick to what I do best (mostly rhyme/ballad with some prose) and to topics that I enjoy such as Metaphysics.

So-being the creative collection cataloguer I am–I have settled on a Metaphysical collection and will begin writing shortly.

I am still working on my book manuscript-mainly in my brain and not working with the actual document.  I am writing about something painful and it is hard to decide if being personal is a good idea or not. 

I’ll figure things out.

Have a great writing day!

October 5, 2009

Hail, Fair Morning

Hail, fair morning

That as flame falls on the ground

Hail to Him that sends her

Morning many-virtued ever new!

 

O fair Morning so full of pride

O sister of the brilliant Sun

Hail to thee, lovely Morning,

That lightest my little book for me!

 

Thou seest the guest in every dwelling

Shinest on every tribe and kin

Hail O thou white-necked, beautiful,

Here with us now, O golden-fair and wonderful!

 

My little book with chequered page

Tells me my life hath not been right;

Maelcroin–’tis he whom I do well to fear:

He it is that comes to smite me at the last.

 

O scallcrow, scallcrow,

Grey-coated, sharp-beaked, paltry fowl!

The intent of thy desire is apparent to me,

No friend art though to Cellach.

 

O raven, thou makest croaking!

If hungry thou be now, O bird!

From this same rath deart not

Until thou have a serfeit of my flesh.

 

Fiercely the kite of Cluain-eo’s, yew tree

Will take part in the scramble;

His horn hued talons full he’ll carry off,

He will not part from me in kindness.

 

To the blow that fells me the fox

That’s in the darkling wood will make response at speed

He too in cold and trackless confines

Shall devour a portion of my flesh and blood.

 

The wolf that’s in the rath

Upon the easter side of Druim mic Dair:

He on a passing visit comes to me,

that he may rank as chieftain of the meaner pack.

 

On Wednesday’s night last past I saw a dream:

As one the wild dogs dragged me

Eastwards and westwards

Through the russet ferns.

 

I saw a dream:

That into a green glen men took me;

Four they were that bore me thither,

But ne’er brought me back again.

 

I saw a dream:

That to their house my co-disciples led me;

For me they poured out a drink,

A draught too they quaffed off to me.

 

O tiny wren most scant of tail!

Dolefully thou has piped prophetic lay;

Surely thou art come to betray me,

And to curtail my gift of life. . .

(Seven stanzas follow)

The saint is then set upon by the young men and killed.  Later Cellach’s brother, Muiredach, finds the body of the Saint “part eaten by the creatures.”  He laments: 

By Saint Cellach of Killala

This ballad reminds me of a poem I wrote about being in a glen and having my soul taken from me–I foresee a future You Tube reading–check back here soon.

October 4, 2009

Life Is Fleeting You Tube Reading

October 3, 2009

Support Young Poets

I found this  in the mix of poems by young poets that PBS selected to highlight, and I am impressed.  It was my favorite poem out of those published:

In Sight of Land

 A dove awing, a bird of flight,
A troubled heart with no place to light.
O’er vast waters do both fly,
Neither quite knowing why.

The dove in flight knows but one dream,
A place to nest, a place to lie,
A place of rest and soft blue sky’s.
At last an olive branch sparkles yonder in his eye.

Yet with his dream so close at hand,
Mere miles away, in the sight of land,
The dove’s struggle to fly for more,
His will to live, to walk through paradise’s door,
All did falter and fall to the sea,
Yet somehow the dove was finally free.

Even till death, the dove kept sight of land,
And although he will never light upon the olive tree,
Nor run his toes through the sand,
The dove was happy for he’d done all he could,
He’d tried his best, just as he’d promised himself he would.

Never settle for less than you can give,
A heart’s greatest crime is to live and not try,
To never care or dance or cry or question why,
To live a life afraid to die is just the same as a life afraid to live.
Submitted by Kyle, Victoria, TX

 

October 3, 2009

PBS Poetry

PBS supports poetry well and has plenty of good links to explore. I think children 13 and younger can still submit poetry under the submit poetry button, but I am not sure.

Check it out:

PBS Poetry

October 3, 2009

Positive, Spiritual Blog

Same Team – Good News for September 27

27 09 2009

Mark 9:38-41

At that time, John said to Jesus, ”Teacher, we saw someone driving out demons in your name, and we tried to prevent him because he does not follow us.” Jesus replied, “Do not prevent him. There is no one who performs a mighty deed in my name who can at the same time speak ill of me. For whoever is not against us is for us. Anyone who gives you a cup of water to drink because you belong to Christ,  amen, I say to you, will surely not lose his reward.

This is why I do not discriminate against people of other denominations-along with the fact that my family has a varied Protestant background.

Kin’s blog is full of positive affirmations for daily living.  You won’t find anything vulgar, anything hateful–only kindness.  Thank you, Kin, for visiting Poet Verse.

 

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October 3, 2009

The Poet’s Voice

I don’t want freedom gram by gram, grain by grain.

I have to break this steel chain with my teeth!

I don’t want freedom as a drug, as a medicine,

I want it as the sun, as the earth, as the heavens!

Step, step aside, you invader!

I am the loud voice of this land!

I don’t need a puny spring!

I am thirsting for oceans!

By Khalil Reza Uluturk

Translated from the Azeri by Aynur H. Imecer

October 3, 2009

Quote For The Week

Whoever seeks peace and the good of the community with a pure conscience, and keeps alive the desire for the transcendent, will be saved even if he lacks biblical faith.— Pope Benedict XVI.

October 2, 2009

Pomegranates

Les Grenades

Hard pomegranates sundered

By excess of your seeds,

You make me think of mighty brows

Aburst with their discoveries!

 

If the suns you underwent,

O pomegranates severed,

Wrought your essence with the pride

To rend your ruby segments,

 

And if the dry gold of your shell

At instance of power

Cracks in the crimson gems of juice,

 

This luminous eruption

Sets a soul to dream upon

Its secret architecture.

By Paul Valery

Translated from the French by Kate Flores

Editor’s Note:  I chose this poem because it reminded me of the first time I saw a pomegranate’s interior.  I was thoroughly disgusted.  I have a weird issue about really intricate designs.  I love pomegranates–opening them up–not so much.  I even had nightmares about them….

October 2, 2009

Autumn Song

                               Long Autumn rain;

White mists which choke the vale, and blot the sides

Of the bewildered hills; in all the plain

No field aglean where the gold pageant was,

And silent o’er a tangle of drenched grass

                                    The blackbird glides.

 

In the heart, –fire

Fire and clear air and cries of water-springs,

And large, pure winds; all April’s quick desire,

All June’s possession; a most fearless Earth

Drinking great ardours; and the rapturous birth

                                          Of winged things.

By Edward Dowden (1843-1913) Ireland

October 2, 2009

Words

Words are useless, stubborn, twisted

like screws that won’t go in straight.

And they tire me.  But they are all I have.

The playthings of a poor boy.

They lie gutted all around me.

All their magic spills out of their open bowels.

Their inner workings long ago stopped being

intriguing or attractive.

There’s no challenge.  There’s no spark.  There’s no color.

The world is as gray as my disgust.

Words are the columns of my fatigue.

But they are–I have said it, I repeat–all I have.

By Roger Wolfe

Translated from the Spanish by Gary Hawkins.

October 2, 2009

Yay!!!

I beat my old record for busiest day!  Today, I had 206 hits.  Thanks for reading Poet Verse :)

October 1, 2009

Soaring Blog Stats

I’m almost tied with my busiest blog day:

Total views: 20,122

Busiest day: 193 — Thursday, September 25, 2008

Views today: 181

Thanks for reading Poet Verse

October 1, 2009

La Jolie Rousse

The Pretty Redhead

Here I am before all a man of sense

Knowing life and death as much as a human being can know

Having experienced the pangs and the joys of love

Having known at times how to impose his ideals

Acquainted with several languages

Having traveled not a little

Having seen war in the Artillery and the Infantry

Wounded in the head trepanned under chloroform

Having lost his best friends in the frightful struggle

I know of the old and the new as much as one man can

know of the two

And without being disturbed today by this war

Between us and for us my friends

I judge this long quarrel about tradition and invention

                                   About order and Adventure

 

You whose mouth is made in the image of God’s

Mouth which is order itself

Be indulgent when you compare us

With those who were the perfection of order

We who seek adventure everywhere

 

We are not your enemies

We strive to give you vast and strange domains

Where mystery flowers for all who would gather it

There are new fires of colors there never seen before

A thousand imponderable phantasms

To which reality must be given

We strive to explore kindness enormous country where all is still

There is also time which can be banished or recaptured

Pity us who struggle ever on the frontiers

Of the limitless and the future

Pity us our errors pity us our sins

 

Here now comes summer the violent season

And my youth as well as the spring is dead

O Sun this is the time of ardent Reason

             And I expect

To follow ever the sweet and noble form

Which she takes that I may love only her

She comes and draws me as a magnet iron

                  She has the charming aspect

                    Of an adorable redhead

 

Her hair is of gold one might say

A lovely flash of lightning that endures

Or those flames which flaunt

In tea roses that wither

But laugh at me

Men everywhere especially people here

For there are so   many things that I do not dare tell you

So many things that you would not permit me to say

Have pity on me.

By Guillame Apollinaire

Translated from the French by Kate Flores

October 1, 2009

Be Not Too Hard

Be not too hard for life is short

And nothing is given to man;

Be not too hard when he is sold and bought

For he must manage as best he can;

Be not too hard when he gladly dies

Defending things he does not own;

Be not too hard when he tells lies

And if his heart is sometimes like a stone

Be not too hard-for he soon dies,

Often no wiser than be began;

Be not too hard for life is short

And nothing is given to man.

By Christopher Logue

September 30, 2009

Curious

I removed my earlier post because this is my happy place, and it should stay that way-I might express an opinion and remove it later-once the thought has passed.

But I have to say-I’d rather spend my time online trying to make the world better and more beautiful instead of telling people that folks who read the KJV of the Bible are going to Hell because a symbol of Satan is inside of it, that  G-d is an alpha male who forces us to believe in Him or He sends us to eternal damnation, or that our country became capitalist feminists because the Rockefellers funded a special program to change American life forever.

I mean, really, I might have had my brain’s neurons rapidly firing in chaos for a brief period in my life, but at least they haven’t gelled into a chaotic mess. 

Why do these blogs exist?  I’m also curious….do people feel like they are really helping the world find the “truth” as some have put it–because all I see is hate and bitterness.

That is the reason why I posted earlier-if you read it.

September 29, 2009

Fascinating Volumes Of Poetry

 

 

The Library here has a pretty decent collection of poetry.  It could be better, but with the volumes

highlighted below-I would say that it is a pretty good selection.

You may also see more of the books I am reading/have read at: Carolina Maine at Goodreads

1000 Years of Irish Poetry: The Gaelic and Anglo Irish Poets from Pagan Times to the Present

by Kathleen Hoagland

 

1000 Years of Irish Poetry: The Gaelic and Anglo Irish Poets from Pagan Times to the Present
book data
all editions
23 ratings, 3.91 average rating, 3 reviews
this edition
7 ratings, 4.14 average rating, 1 review

 

published
November 25th 1999 (first published 1986) by Welcome Rain
binding
Paperback, 830 pages
isbn
1566490103    (isbn13: 9781566490108)
description
You can find almost anything in it. We very much doubt anyone is going to produce better anthology of Irish poetry than this one.–The New York Time….

Language for a New Century: Contemporary Poetry from the Middle East, Asia, and Beyond

by Nathalie Handal, Ravi Shankar, Tina Chang

Language for a New Century: Contemporary Poetry from the Middle East, Asia, and Beyond
book data
all editions
24 ratings, 4.25 average rating, 4 reviews

 

published
April 7th 2008 by W. W. Norton
binding
Paperback, 560 pages
isbn
0393332381    (isbn13: 9780393332384)
description
A landmark anthology, providing the most ambitious, far-reaching collection of contemporary Asian and Middle Eastern poetry available.

 

Language for a New Century celebrates the artistic and cultural forces flourishing today in the East, bringing together an unprecedented selection of works by South Asian, East Asian, Middle Eastern, and Central Asian poets as well as poets living in the Diaspora. Some poets, such as Bei Dao and Mahmoud Darwish, are acclaimed worldwide, but many more will be new to the reader. The collection includes 400 unique voices—political and apolitical, monastic and erotic—that represent a wider artistic movement that challenges thousand-year-old traditions, broadening our notion of contemporary literature.

Each section of the anthology—organized by theme rather than by national affiliation—is preceded by a personal essay from the editors that introduces the poetry and exhorts readers to examine their own identities in light of these powerful poems. In an age of violence and terrorism, often predicated by cultural ignorance, this anthology is a bold declaration of shared humanity and devotion to the transformative power of art.

September 29, 2009

A Word For Freedom

Let’s kiss water,

the root of civilization,

a word for freedom.

 

I’m in love with water,

with roaring and restless rivers

that are not seduced by trees

nor captured by jungles.

They flow day and night,

carry on forever.

 

Let’s praise rivers that lust for flowing,

for searching, for a heart of temptation

that know what message water delivers to stone,

the question water asks from quiet coasts.

 

Passerby, for a long time

the river has been constrained in an old robe

on our street and thrown into a well.

 

Water wars with the well,

water in the mind of a tree,

water in the solitude of a cup,

water in the memory of flowerpot,

inconsolable.

 

I had a wonderful dream on Friday night.

I dreamed the river ran free,

that on its roaring horse,

it rode over stones,

past the border of farms.

By Latif Nazemi

Translated from the Persian/Dari by Bashir Sakhawarz

September 28, 2009

Meet Me On Twitter?

I tried Twitter out last year, but I didn’t really care for it.  I am trying it again.  If you would like to follow me on Twitter:

Carolina Maine

My Twitter posts are visible on the bottom right corner of my widgets now-Enjoy!

September 28, 2009

Colorado Nature Photos

I’m enjoying discovering all the beautiful nooks and crannies of Colorado.  My favorite parts of nature are water and rocks so I always enjoy hopping into streams to capture their beauty intimately.  Perhaps, once I am able to financially swing it, I will buy a nice camera.  Right now-I only have a Sony Cybershot in pink-but it gets the job done.

Email me for use of these photos.  Someone has searched them repeatedly without asking for use permission.

Images removed-available upon request.  carolinamaine at gmail dot com

 

September 26, 2009

How To Love

September 25, 2009

Camera Phobia Be Gone!

I hate being in front of cameras.  I don’t know why.  Maybe it is because I don’t like to see my face move.  Who knows? Anyway, since I had an unused You Tube account, I decided to give reading my poems online a try.

I hope you like the poem I shared today, How To Love.

Thanks for reading/watching Poet Verse and have a great writing day!

September 25, 2009

God Said…

Mon Dieu m’a dit…

God said:  “My son you must love me.  You see

My pierced side, my heart radiant with blood,

And my injured feet bathed by Magdalene’s tears,

My arms that ache under the weight of your

 

Sins, my hands too!  You see the cross,

You see nails, gall, sponge, and all teach you

To love in this bitter world of flesh

Only my Flesh and Blood, my word and voice.

 

Oh, have I not loved you even unto the death,

Brother in my Father, son in the Holy Ghost,

Have I not suffered for you as it was written?

 

Have I not sobbed for you in your great agony,

Have I not sweated the sweat of your dark nights,

Oh pitiful friend, who seeks me when I am here?”

–By Paul Verlaine

Translated from the French by Muriel Kittel

September 25, 2009

Got A Favorite Poet?

I didn’t write today. I re-read what I have been working on and made some changes, but that is all.

Today hasn’t been a fantastic day.  I’m sure tomorrow will be better.

I think I am just feeling stress because I moved here and haven’t replaced my job yet.  I would like to get out of the house for something constructive and soon.

I have thought about getting serious about editing and starting a small service, but I am waiting on some things first.

I joined a parish here and volunteered for several positions, but it has been several weeks and no one has contacted me-despite my follow-up email.

I have an old Volvo station wagon that I am trying to donate, but that hasn’t worked out either.  My husband wants me to sell it, but it is in bad shape, and I don’t really want to sell it.  I guess I am still clinging to Red Roger; I love him-sniff sniff.

How do I pass the time on adumbral days?

I read.

Today-it was poetry.

So-if you would like,

Sound off on who your favorite poets are!

Here’s hoping that tomorrow is a brighter day!

September 23, 2009

For A Five-Year-Old

A snail is climbing up the window-sill

into your room, after a night of rain.

 

You call me in to see, and I explain

that it would be unkind to leave it there:

it might crawl to the floor; we must take care

that no one squashes it.  You understand,

and carry it outside, with careful hand,

to eat a daffodil.

 

I see, then, that a kind of faith prevails:

your gentleness is moulded still by words

from me, who have trapped mice and shot wild birds,

from me, who drowned your kittens, who betrayed

your closest relatives, and who purveyed

the harshest kind of truth to many another.

But that is how things are:  I am your mother,

and we are kind to snails.

By Fleur Adcock

 

 This reminded me of my girls so much.

September 23, 2009

What Is Your Writing Weakness?

Quotation marks.

I hate them.

I never know where the punctuation goes.

Someone tells me and my brain dumps it as useless garbage.

How do I turn that switch off?!

Yeah,

I hate quotation marks.

So what.

Haha….

So–what’s your writing weakness?

September 23, 2009

Words, Words, Words….

I’m 6, 486 words in!

Hooray!

The changes that I made truly helped my writing, and I am satisfied that I took the time to re-work what had already been written.

Revision is a process of discovery-embrace it.

Have a great writing day!

September 23, 2009

Quote For The Week

The man who has everything figured out is probably a fool.  College examinations notwithstanding,

 it takes a very smart fella to say

                                                                            ”I don’t know the answer!”

–Jerome Lawrence and Robert E. Lee, Inherit The Wind

September 23, 2009

More Rhythm Please

It is too bad that I can’t sing or play an instrument because I only write to rhythms.  Even my college papers had rhythm; I never let style be separate from academic topics. Trust me, it is quite a feat to make emergency management and public administration rhythmical. Oh, Weber, Oh Weber….Ha!  Smiling yet?

Anyway, today I realized that my conversational tone (purposely chosen) for my manuscript is fine as it lends to the intimacy I want to extend–but it is too see spot run.  Today, I wrote about a very difficult life event and employed some imagery that could fit into a rhythm.

I actually learned to read at an early age because of rhythm.

It is too bad really–that I have no other form of expression than words on a page.

I wish I could be a painter like  Georgia O’Keefe.  I noticed some similarities in my life to hers-not absolutes-similarities and that was comforting.  I don’t know why. 

If I could choose the talents I would like to have been born with I would choose:

Painting

Singing

Instrumental

Writing

I am over 5,000 words into my book and today I re-worked just about everything I had written.  I listened with my internal ear-so I expect it to be even more perfect once an editor gets his or her hands on it.

Take care, and good writing!

September 22, 2009

Awkward Voice In Writing

Re-reading my manuscript this morning, I am appalled by the awkward voice that is apparent in many important areas.  I have gone through and struck out many sentences and have changed sentence/verb structure to allow for more accuracy.

I also noticed that I was using a passive voice in some areas; I changed those areas to an active voice.

When you write about an emotional subject, it is common to have your basic skeleton thoughts fall onto the paper before you perfect the actual passages.

When I was younger, I could write about anything and did not need revision to the degree that I need it now.  I attribute this to old age and writing about painful subject matter.

I’m satisfied that I took a break from writing for a day.  It is good to write and keep up the pace, but sometimes a break can reveal errors and awkwardness that you might otherwise miss if you allowed yourself to press on without taking time to decompress.

So–take your time.  Revision is important-it is the detail in your writing’s form.

Have a good writing day!

September 22, 2009

Ghazal

after Hafez

However large earth’s garden, mine’s enough.

One rose and the shade of a vine’s enough.

 

I don’t want more wealth, I don’t need more dross.

The grape has its bloom and it shines enough.

 

What can Paradise offer us beggars

and fools?  What ecstasy, when wine’s enough?

 

Come and sit by the stream.  Rivers run dry

but to carry their song, a chime’s enough.

 

Like the sun in bazaars, streaming in shafts,

any slant on the grand design’s enough.

 

When you’re here, my love, what more could I want?

Just mentioning love in a line’s enough.

 

Heaven can wait.  To have found, heaven knows,

a bed and a roof so divine’s enough.

 

I’ve no grounds for complaint.  As Hafez says,

isn’t a ghazal that he signs enough?

–By Mimi Khalvati

September 22, 2009

Manuscript Font

This morning, I changed my book manuscript font to Latha because it is compact and it resembles a typewriter.  Yes, I took typing way back in the day (7th grade) and used an electronic typewriter.

I’m rambling.

Latha font looks much cleaner and it appears to have corrected the font irregularity problem I experienced earlier.  I will probably make a docx file and convert to PDF later on.  PDF is my favorite!

Anyway, because I feel like chatting and don’t have my friends here:

I couldn’t sleep last night, but when my hubby came home (around midnight), we put in the movie The Boat That Rocked.  It was a little wild for my taste, but I didn’t know that is was based on the pirate radio boats in the 1960s that challenged UK authorities to play rock n roll–so I found that interesting.

I fell asleep naturally at 2:30 so I am super happy about that!

Today, hubby (since he is off) put in Away We Go.  It is a pretty good movie–hubby must be bored as he dozed off.  It is 9:12 am, Little Man, wake up!

I’m working on my manuscript and playing with my youngest.  She journeys to her room only a few steps away and emerges with various tiny objects that are imagined food items-so I am served breakfast of various kinds–oh–and I love on babies-her many baby dolls.

It’s a good morning.

If it isn’t too cold-I will ride my bike.

I truly hate cold weather so I am not looking forward to the winter here.

I imagine myself on a beach-somewhere south–somewhere humid.

Enjoy your day!

September 22, 2009

Word Count

I didn’t really write anything today. I found some missing words late tonight and added them–and changed the wording in some awkward areas.  That is about it.

I have never saved anything in RTF before.  I did it because it is supposed to be more compatible with other systems.  But today, when I printed the manuscript out at the business office in my complex–the font was all messed up.  It looked horrible.  Does anyone have experience with RTF files?  My documents save in docx, and I have had complaints that my files can’t be read.  If I try to save to doc–it won’t save.

Oh well.

I only have 4,146 words right now.  I will start working on it again tomorrow.

I’m tired and am turning in early-mainly to listen to relaxation music and think before I fall into sleepy land.

Have a good night.

September 21, 2009

Sadness by Carolina Maine

You caught me in a rare moment of wanting to share a poem from my bound Confession collection.  I didn’t have a specific poem in mind; I just opened the book and picked the one I landed on.

When sadness comes

It drives away passions

Life becomes perfunctory

Restless no more–is my heart

 

Listless–it barely beats

Never stirs–for more impassioned feats

 

When melodies operatic do sound

Slight inner wakes do compound

 

But heart laden–broken

Isn’t worth torturing–for token

Gestures given only in haste

 

When time and love

                            Forever remain chaste

Carolina Maine © 2006 Unauthorized Use Is Prohibited

September 21, 2009

Yeah, Whatever…

This is taken from Mehta’s How to Write Poetry page 38 in its entirety.

Accuracy    Take a look a these three lines:

                                    The wine-dark sea

                                     crashes onto the beach

                                     like bottles of broken Cabernet.

It’s a pretty awful image:  the writer has gone over-board in using figurative language.  Just because wine-dark is a metaphor for the color of the sea doesn’t mean the writer has to follow up by extending the metaphor to broken bottles of wine.  Thing about it logically:  waves don’t physically crash down onto beaches the way bottles break, and the sounds don’t match up.  Waves are softer and appear over and over again; bottles shatter with a single loud sound, in a one-time event.  The word crashes doesn’t seem exactly right.  For figurative language to be effective, every word needs to be carefully chosen.  Take a look at this revision:

The wine-dark sea

slides into the beach

like spilled soda.

That’s still not brilliant poetry, especially since the poet has mixed “wine” with “soda” in the same metaphor, but it works a bit better because the images make more sense; the sea fizzes and sputters just liked spilled soda, as it reaches the beach.  That’s more accurate than crashing and broken bottles.  Remember:  figurative language doesn’t have to be grand; it just has to be accurate.

Alright–all that you just read was written by Mehta.

That is the most unfortunate verse describing the ocean that I have ever read.

I wonder if Mehta has had much experience observing the ocean during different times of the year?

If she had more experience then maybe she would have realized that crashing and the sounds in the first version sound much better than her wine/soda metaphor.

I think the first version is better because it is loud, palpable; I can hear the waves crashing into a jagged beach–one with massive, ocean- beaten rocks. Many times, one large wave creates a crashing sound followed by small waves that do not crash-so a one-time crashing event is possible.

Spilled soda reminds me of a mess….just like her revision.  Soda doesn’t ripple rhythmically so if we want to go all out on being logical–you have it–poetry is not a math equation. Soda does sputter and fizzle like the ocean though.

I would write the revision as:

The wine-dark sea (this indicates it is winter as the sea is darker in the winter)

crashes into frigid, jugular rocks

like bottles of broken Cabernet

coagulating a violent beach vein.–Carolina Maine

The reason why I chose crashing is because I think Mehta originally set out to show the intensity of the ocean and she ended up changing her mind with the revised version.  In other words, she was not originally clear about what she wanted to describe.

I used frigid  to show the essence of winter time as it matches the color of the ocean water depicted…I kept the  bottles and added jugular because I am showing how the water moves up into the life channels of the beach and still makes noise as it moves through beach matter (rocks which are jagged like shards of bottles).  Violent=intensity and elevates the sound of the word crashes. Coagulates was used to depict the lingering water that seeps back down into the ocean from the rocks and it also shows that some water remains in still puddles between the rocks–just as was when one throws a wine bottle–wine will be found between and beneath the shards.

I detect that Mehta is of Indian descent or background.  She didn’t give a source for these two poem excerpts so I am assuming she manufactured them herself.  My husband also shares a problem that I noticed Mehta has–using words like onto incorrectly.  Onto was not accurate given the natural perspective of the observer and should have been into.

I am sure Diane Mehta has enjoyed admirable success, but you–as a writer–must feel confident in what you are trying to say–don’t rely heavily on “succesful” poets to be “perfect” and to have wisdom far beyond your own.  Trust in yourself.  Know your work.

So now you know why I titled this Yeah, Whatever….we read…we learn…we toss aside what is not useful…and we move to something better.

 

September 21, 2009

Word Of The Day

Inure•

Verb

To cause someone or something to become accustomed to the situation.

Becoming a mother and realizing that toys will never stay in place inured  me to the discomforts of not having a perfectly tidy home.

September 20, 2009

Writing

I’m up to 4,105 words for my book manuscript.

Have a great writing day!

September 20, 2009

Ballads Are My Favorite

 

The Ballad Of Father Gilligan

 

The old priest Peter Gilligan

Was weary night and day;

For half his flock were in their beds,

Or under green sods lay.

 

Once, while he nodded on a chair,

At the moth-hour of eve,

Another poor man sent for him,

And he began to grieve.

 

“I have no rest, nor joy, nor peace,

For people die and die”;

And after he cried, “God forgive!

My body spake, not I!”

 

He knelt, and leaning on the chair

He prayed and fell asleep;

And the moth-hour went from the fields,

And stars began to peep.

 

They slowly into millions grew,

And leaves shook in the wind;

And God covered the world with shade,

And whispered to mankind.

 

Upon the time of sparrow chirp

When moths came once more,

The old priest Peter Gilligan

Stood upright on the floor.

 

“Mavrone, mavrone! the man has died (mavrone means grief)

While I slept on the chair”;

He roused his horse out of its sleep,

And rode with little care.

 

He rode now as he never rode,

By rocky lane and fen; (fen means swampy marsh)

The sick man’s wife opened the door:

“Father!  you come again!”

 

“And is the poor man dead?” he cried.

“He died an hour ago.”

The old priest Peter Gilligan

In grief swayed to and fro.

 

“When you were gone, he turned and died

As merry as a bird.”

The old priest Peter Gilligan

He knelt him at that word.

 

“He Who hath made the night of stars

For souls who tire and bleed,

Sent one of His great angels down

To help me in my need.

 

“He Who is wrapped in purple robes,

With planets in His care,

Had pity on the least of things,

Asleep upon a chair.”

By William Butler Yeats

 1000 Years of Irish Poetry Edited by Kathleen Hoagland

September 20, 2009

Manuscript Progress

I am 3,050 words into my manuscript and have done some editing on the 1,000 words I wrote last night.  I do need to go in and change some names or figure out how to structure things a little better–but I am pleased with the progress so far.

I’ve written several test drafts before committing to this manuscript.  In the past, my hurt and anger clouded my ability to write so I hope that stays at bay for the duration it takes me to write this life event story.

Have a ritual for writing.  For me, I reward myself.  I took myself on a brisk morning walk this morning to further celebrate my commitment to this manuscript.  Last night, I indulged in a late night bath by candlelight.  Soothing nature music flowed from my Ipod into my ears.  A Jasmine Vanilla oil bath delighted my olfactory bulb. It was a perfect ending to a very stressful writing session.

Sometimes writing is a pleasure.  Other times it is painful.  Writing is cathartic but it can wreak havoc on a writer when the subject matter is sensitive.  The best way, I have found, to reward myself is to find soothing activities that help clear my mind and relax my tense muscles.

If I am writing at night, I like to say my Saint Michael prayer and light his candle; it is soothing to have his flicker against my laptop’s dreary artificial light.

Have a great writing day!

September 19, 2009

“I saw the daughter of the sun…”

I saw the daughter of the sun; she stood

Under the north rise of the copse, where now

The shade-hoar faded, where began to show

Pale primrose-heads, fresh as her own pale hood

Of straight hair, groups of early mercury

No greener than her own plain sheeny gown-

Long had I wandered in the winter-town

Of smoke-grey fog, of stone-grey field and tree.

 

Nor girl she seemed, nor goddess; her grave face,

Soft as a child’s yet wise, brighter than spring,

More warm than summer, had strange shadowing,

Than mundane lustre held both more and less;

 

No mirth was there, no glee, no eagerness,

No love, save love for every living thing.

By Elizabeth Daryush

Editor’s Note:  I will highlight my favorite passages in many poems.

-Carolina Maine

September 19, 2009

The Red Wheelbarrow

 

so much depends

upon

 

a red wheel

barrow

 

glazed with rain

water

 

beside the white

chickens.

By William Carlos Williams

September 19, 2009

Manuscript

I’m working on my book manuscript right now.  Yeah-I know I don’t have to announce it to the world–but I find it helps keep me motivated.

 

Keep Writing

 

And

Thanks for reading Poet Verse!

September 18, 2009

Caesuras….

are pauses in lines of poetry.

Caesuras add music to lines of poetry.

Use them to make your work powerful, rhythmic, supsenseful, and musical.

What indicates a caesura?

A pause , pauses indicated by commas, semi-colons, colons-or periods.

Caesuras appear at the beginning, middle, or end of a line-or not at all.

Where is the caesura in this line?

Sweet though in sadness.  Be thou, Spirit fierce,

-Percy Bysshe Shelley “Ode to the West Wind”

The caesuras are at the beginning, middle, and end of the line.

A line of poetry cannot be said to contain full sentences at all times (there are exceptions).  Rather, a great deal of poetry lines contain multiple thoughts that are punctuated for emphasis–so think outside of traditional sentence structure when placing punctuation marks.

Caesuras are also a great choice for presenting contradicting ideas.

“Epistle II” by Alexander Pope

Created half to rise, and half to fall;

Great lord of all things, yet a prey to all

The midpoint of each line shows how the half of the line contradicts the other half.

Caesuras also draw attention to important lines in a poem.

from Mehta How to Write Poetry

September 18, 2009

Excuse and Explanation

I’m not a poet

is there really such a thing as a living poet

 

I’m a school teacher

I teach math

computer science

as well as ethics and the psychology of family life

 

on top of this I return home each day

to my wife

 

as a romantically inclined pilot once said

love is not when two people look at one another

but when they both look in the same direction

 

this is about us

 

for ten years now my wife and I

have been looking in the same direction

 

at the television

 

for eight years now our son looks that way too

 

I’m not a poet

is there a hole in the watertight round-the-clock alibi

set forth above

 

the combination of misunderstanding and happenstance

that leads now and then to the appearance of my poems

in the periodical press

compels me to confess

 

I write poetry when it becomes unavoidable

while I monitor in-class exams

in spite of all the public school reforms

individual pupils continue to cheat

 

to prevent this

 

I’m forced to sit with my neck craned

wide-eyed and vigilant

unblinking gaze fastened on a space just above the floor

 

this pose leads inevitably

to the composition of verse

 

anyone who’s interested can verify this

 

my poems are short

because in-class exams rarely last longer than 45 minutes

 

I’m not a poet

 

and perhaps

that’s why I’m interesting

–By Evgenii Bunimovich

Translated from the Russian by Patrick Henry

Evgenii won my heart with the highlighted passages!

September 17, 2009

Lives

Vies

I

      Oh the enormous avenues of the holy land, the terraces of the temple!  What has become of the Brahmin who once taught me Proverbs?  Now, further down, I can still see even old women!  I recall the silver hours, and sun by the rivers, and my girl’s hand on my shoulders, and our caresses as we stood in the peppered heath.  A flight of scarlet pigeons thundered in my brain.  –Exiled here, I had a stage on which I performed the masterpieces of literature the world over.  I might point out to you incredible riches.  I have been following up the history of treasures you might find–and I know what is next!  My wisdom is rejected as chaos.  What is my void when compared to the surprise awaiting you?

II

      I am an inventor far more deserving of attention than all those who have preceded me; a musician who has more-over discovered something like the key of love.  Now a country squire from a lean land with a tranquil sky, I endeavor to throw off lethargy by remembering my mendicant childhood, my years of apprenticeship or my arrival in wooden shoes, my polemics, my five or six windowings, and a few carousalswhen my level head kept me from emulating om comrades’ folly.  I do not miss my former share of divine gaeity.  The quietude of this harsh countryside feeds my dreadful skepticism rather bountifully.  But since this skepticism can no longer be put to use, and since, furthermore, I have devoted myself to a new anxiety, I believe I shall end up a very dangerous madman.

III

      In an attic where I was locked up when I was twelve I got to know the world-I illustrated the human comedy.  In a gin mill I learned history.  At some night revel, in a northern city, I met all the women of the Old Masters.  In an old Paris arcade I was taught the classical science.  In a magnificent mansion, reeking with oriental luxury, I completed my exhaustive tasks and spend my luxurious retreat.  I have burned up my blood.  My duty has been remitted to me.  But that need no longer even concern us.  I am really from beyond the grave, and accept no new commitments.

–By Arthur Rimbaud

Translated from the French by Angel Flores

          Editor’s Note:

I chose to highlight and link words that I thought might be stumbling blocks to readers.  Take a moment to check out the definitions if you are unsure of the meanings–or to learn more about the poem.  Learning never ends…so don’t feel bad if you don’t understand how a word is used in a piece.

–Carolina Maine

September 17, 2009

Daughter’s Art Blog

My daughter, Meena, has started her own blog for family and friends. 

You can find it here Meenart or as a page at the top of Poet Verse.

Thanks for reading!

September 17, 2009

Word Of The Day

Trenchant•

ADJ

Effective, Articulate, Clear-cut

The trenchant directions that allowed me to assemble the bicycle in thirty minutes were greatly appreciated as I did not have much time until my grandson’s birthday party began.

September 16, 2009

Coming Soon

A new page tab will be coming soon to Poet Verse. 

Check back  Thursday, September 17, 2009, for the unveiling.

You’re gonna love it!

September 16, 2009

Quote For The Week

[L]ife is made of ever so many partings welded together….

                    Divisions among such must come, and must be

                                                met as they come.

–Charles Dickens, Great Expectations

September 16, 2009

Smoke Em

I want.
 
I want to.
 
I
want to smoke.
 
I want to smoke them.
 
I want to smoke them all.
 
I want to smoke them all in Scrabble

–By Carolyn Burica

Carolyn Burica is married and the mother of two children. She teaches middle school language arts in Columbus, Ohio.

© 2009, Unauthorized Use Is Prohibited

• Editor’s Note

This nestled poem reminded me of the hours I spent playing Scrabble with my grandmother and the fierce competitor it often aroused in me.  Thank you, Carolyn, for your submission to Poet Verse, and thank you for your work with young writers.

September 16, 2009

Wandering

I will be off-line on Poet Verse for a week to wander around in my writing world and to practice painting/drawing with my children.  Poet Verse will still be updated as I am entering in the drafts today that will be published on schedule each day.

Sometimes writing leads us to wandering and that wandering is how we develop as writers.

Have a great writing week!

I look forward to meeting you back here at Poet Verse.  If you leave a comment-I will respond at the end of the 7 day period.

Thanks,

Carolina Maine

September 16, 2009

Places We Love

Places we love exist only through us,

Space destroyed is only illusion in the constancy of time,

Places we love we can never leave,

Places we love together, together, together,

 

And is this room really a room, or an embrace,

And what is beneath the window:  a street or years?

And the window is only the imprint left by

The first rain we understood, returning endlessly,

 

And this wall does not define the room, but perhaps the night

Your son began to move in your sleeping blood,

A son like a butterfly of flame in your hall of mirrors,

The night you were frightened by your own light,

 

And this door leads into any afternoon

Which outlives it, forever peopled

With your casual movements, as you stepped,

Like fire into copper, into my only memory;

 

When you go, space closes over like water behind you,

Do not look back:  there is nothing outside you,

Space is only time visible in a different way,

Places we love we can never leave.

 By Ivan V. Lalic

Translated from the Serbo-Croat by Francis R. Jones

September 15, 2009

Good Reads-Join Me

A friend of mine got me started in this back in December 2008, but I didn’t really have time to keep up with it.  Now that I have plenty of free time, I would like to keep it up–and meet new people.

Join me at Good Reads

September 15, 2009

My First Colorado Crick!

Carolina Maine copyright 2009 Unauthorized Use Prohibited.Why?  A southern girl has to find her place in the world!

Had an awesome and relaxing bike ride today.

I woke up exhausted and had a  headache.

Traded it in for some cool Colorado air and sky.

Feel much better now!

September 15, 2009

Can’t Sleep

I went to bed early and woke up by midnight…oh well.

The book I am working on is intense.  When I look at my writing-I feel like ripping out every page of it.

When I am writing-my mind is put in the past-in a place where hope and faith were out of reach.

I don’t like going there.

But I will.

It is the right thing to do.

Have a good night:)

September 15, 2009

An Intimate Poem by Chelsea Lee

Chelsea Lee, copyright 2009.  This poem may not be reprinted or used without authorization.

the proximity of your flesh is enough to
layer the underbelly of guilt
a song you are all too familiar with

a soft brush of pulsing breath
audibly has hairs performing stunts
while i sink basking in denial.

it could have been an unscathed
encounter if only you had held your tongue a moment longer
and not dared linger so close to comfort.

what left with the expiration floated
indefinitely above the both of us
until wind wavered by-

and like flame to candle it was extinguished.
all was dark and silent
while you were carried away.

–Chelsea Lee is a Guest Contributor to Poet Verse

September 14, 2009

I’m a B-word

Yeah…so I’ve been told.

Maybe there is some truth in it.

When I was young, I was angry with the world for all that had happened to me and for what I didn’t have.  I told the priest and the Bishop where I lived that I hated G-d because if there was a G-d there would be no suffering, death, abuse, broken families, and other tragedies in the world.

I guess that turned out to be fine since it would be many years later before I would be baptized…leaving the old “me” in the past.

What I discovered…from my pain, from my suffering, through my anguish….is that I love being alive.

I love my family, and most importantly,

I love G-d for allowing us breath and for believing in humanity despite how we individually and collectively use the gift of free will to commit atrocities against those we love, those we do not know, and those of other cultures.

So yeah–I’m Catholic.

I’m proud of the journey that led me to conversion.

If you don’t want to be Catholic–that is your free will choice.

We all have free will.

I always pray for the suffering, the lost, and those who need deep spiritual comfort.

So–even if you don’t believe–I still pray for you and there is nothing you can really do about it as it is my free will choice to do so.

It is a gift.

Give it back.

Give it to someone else.

Your choice.

On writing:

I put poetry up here by people of other faiths.

I have highlighted a poem that shows a gay man’s love and is a well-written  account of his human story–many priests

struggle with homo-erotic feelings…and Gerard Manley Hopkins was possibly one  of them.

I have poems on here from various countries and from various schools of thought.

So if I am guilty of anything–it is highlighting the strength of the human spirit over the adversities in life.

I think G-d wants us all to be happy–and living in pain–it isn’t the fullest way to live in Christ–who suffered for us.

Whether you believe Christ suffered or not–you must agree that living a happier life is better than wallowing in the pain of things we have experienced.

If you aren’t religious–you can volunteer to help others with things you have struggled with–you can do this if you are religious too–to accompany your prayers.

Life is what you make it–and your heart is as open and merciful as you allow it to be.

Find your beliefs.  Find your inspiration in daily living.  Find your voice.

And most importantly:

WRITE!

September 14, 2009

Woman to Man

For my loving husband, Kal.

The eyeless labourer in the night,

the selfless, shapeless seed I hold,

builds for its resurrection day–

silent and swift and deep from sight

foresees the unimagined light.

 

There is no child with a child’s face;

this has no name to name it by:

yet you and I have known it well.

This is our hunter and our chase,

the third who lay in our embrace.

 

This is the strength that your arm knows,

the arc of flesh that is my breast,

the precise crystals of our eyes.

This is the blood’s wild tree that grows

the intricate and folded rose.

 

This is the maker and the made;

this is the question and reply;

the blind head butting at the dark,

the blaze of light along the blade.

Oh hold me, for I am afraid.

By Judith Wright

Celebration of the best hunts and chases of our lives.

September 14, 2009

Avoid Being An Infantile Anger/Depression Poet….

Have you ever visited an angry, depressing blog and wondered why someone would choose to spend hours a day in such a dark pit of the blog universe?  I have.  In fact, I have visited quite a few angry, depressing blogs by accident.  You somehow usually get sucked in by a nice avatar and find yourself reading what should be saved for a psychoanalyst sprawled in puckered lines and labeled poetry. 

As a person who has had the misfortune of experiencing the kind of depression that destroys a human being and as a person who writes poetry that is not infantile in its anger/focus, I find the amount of angry, depressing poetry blogs on wordpress.com to be unnerving.

Do I suggest that would-be poets write about rainbows an sunsets?  Heck no.

But here–if you are going to delve into the depths of pain and despair…let me tell you how to stylize it in such a way that its anger and darkness is not all that is communicated.  Is anger and darkness really what you want to portray?  Or rather, is it your feelings about such anger and darkness and how it has affected your life and the world around you–is that truly what you are trying to convey?  Don’t you find the latter to be more accurate?

Tips to avoid writing infantile angry, depressing poetry:

1.  Don’t whine with line breaks-that “aint” poetry.

2. Don’t use the word suicide-tell us what suicide looks and feels like–remember–poetry is symbolic in its essence.

3. Don’t show your anger in your poem–it shows that you cannot master handling a basic human emotion..therefore…you cannot construct a well written line of verse…

Rather–let your anger be shown in the construct of the poem–include other feelings that accompany anger as it shows how the anger has evoked other painful emotions within you and show how you have overcome it–or show how you live with it.

I could write more…but truly…I think examples are in order.

Below are two poems that illustrate how to write about dark subjects without overpowering your reader with depression and anger.

Balance Copyright 2002, This poem may not be used or reprinted without authorization.

To Balance

Is to sway most frantic

No stillness in its maintenance

Only static and chaotic notions-mechanic

To balance

Is to sway

To grapple

Bend

Yield

Make way

To balance

Is to master

the composition–of chaos

        And its illusory dominance.

By Carolina Maine

What is “Balance” alluding to?

Depression and Suicide

Fortunate Starvation  Copyright, 2004 This poem may not be used or reprinted without authorization.

Fortunate starvation

This heart has lived

Despite droughts with no bounty to yield

 

Though fortunate in spirit

This frame does maintain

An excellent source of mercy

and passion that no fulfilled heart could sustain

 

Lingering ache

No starvation could imitate

A hunger beyond mortal need

A desire flaming with divine-intimacy’s seed

 

How may I cease

When my body shall be rendered beneath

The heaping earth

That is no match for my heart’s austere mirth

 

Had I known that in childhood’s girth

That I would grow into a passionate being–hurt

I would have killed

The heart that would in the future strain against fury to live

 

Though I’ve been brutally thrown

From innocent understanding’s belong

I am alive none-the-less

Despite death’s savage and beastly attempts at theft

 

For, my heart is forever conformed

To that of G-d’s–violent and strong

It will prevail

Despite soil and metered hail

                  As a reminder

                             To those who would fail

                                            The brutality of  life

                                                                   Is a most nurturing

                                                                                     And refreshing

                                                                                                   Ever–deepening–well.

By Carolina Maine

What is “Fortunate Starvation” about?

The poem is about suffering  sexual abuse, maturing into a young woman, being in love, being a mistress, finding my faith in G-d and in myself, recognizing life can be brutal and destructive–but that it can also transform a weak woman into a strong woman of faith–a woman who will not fail at life by ending it all by her own hands in a moment of despair.

Maybe I have discovered right now why writing my book is so difficult.  I am writing without symbolism and feel vulnerable.

I have put my poems on Poet Verse in the past and have never offered a meaning….so this is pretty vulnerable of me.

I did this for other poets on wordpress–wallowing in pain–in infantile form–it doesn’t show the beauty of the human spirit and how it can overcome life’s brutalities.  All it does is force your reader into a dark place–if mass depression and anger is what you want to propogate–keep at it…but I for one…will not be reading your blog posts.

Enjoy the beauty of this day–and look for the strength within you–to make melodic–and inspiring–what is painful.

You may wonder why I chose a word like violent to describe G-d and my heart.  It is important to know ALL the definitions of a word to appreciate nuances–

Violent definition #3–Intense in force/effect…I chose this word because it is a mirror and reflects back to the violence of the world–where humans commit violent acts against one another–but a heart stong in G-d will be intense in force/effect to combat against such earthly violence.

–Carolina Maine

September 13, 2009

Awesome Blog Highlight

I have a lot of European translated poetry on Poet Verse so when I found a blogger named George Messo who chronicles translated poetry events and who is also a poet and translator, I became giddy-some would say excited.

Check out George Messo.

Thanks for reading Poet Verse.

September 11, 2009

1 hour mark

I got 4 pages done.  My youngest who is 4 wants my attention so I need to give it to her.  It feels good to have abandoned my fear and to have written.  I feel confident in keeping up the pace.

Keep writing!

September 11, 2009

Write Write Write

Carolina Maine is writing from 11:50 am until 1:50 pm.  I will delve into that book topic I mentioned earlier.  No excuses.  No fears of failure.  Just writing!

Get to it!

Have a Happy Writing Day!

Thanks for reading Poet Verse

September 11, 2009

Poetry Guardians Reject Modern Verse

If you like rhyme and meter in poetry and pretty much detest “modern snobs” because they discount its value in today’s world, check out this article:  Poetry Guardians Reject Modern Verse.  While I don’t reject modern verse–it is not my favorite and publishers should not thumb their noses at well written rhyming verse.

While I was at Vermont Studio (VSC), I met Kevin Young.  He said my poetry was sing-song-ey and that I should write prose poetry instead.  I told him that I grew up with ballads and beautiful poetry that rhymed so that is my preferred method of expression.  Mr. Young said my rhymes were obvious; however, I highly doubt that as I have always used creative and abstract methods.  I would suggest that VSC match incoming artists to appropriate writers as I really didn’t benefit from the workshop with him.  I think that is why I felt disappointed in my writing abilities-you don’t go to workshops or take residency time to work with people who do not share your aesthetic.  Oh well–I did meet wonderful poets in residence so that made the trip worthwhile.  I think Mr. Young said my poetry rhymes were obvious to goad me into writing prose poetry.  I did write one prose poem and performed it during the poetry reading at VSC; I think he was satisfied with that effort.  Mr. Young is a polite person, but we don’t share the same taste in poetry.  I have written more prose poetry since meeting Mr. Young, but I don’t enjoy it as much as when I employ more rhythm.

September 11, 2009

On Becoming a Writer…

On Becoming a Writer…was written by a friend, Philip Osgood, whom I met at the Vermont Studio Center (VSC).  If you read my blog often, you know that I have not written very much since returning from VSC.  I want to write about a life experience that I have had, but I am hesitant given the subject matter.  I think of what I will write over 50 times per day and dream about it….the fact that I am not writing is making me extremely grouchy.  Part of me is afraid I cannot write it satisfactorily.  I hope I can get over this soon.  Philip’s suggestions and encouragement (indirectly through his experience in the post) is helping me to understand I need to write–even if it is junk–before revision.

Thanks Philip!!

September 11, 2009

Moments

Moments are curious things. Lying stagnate among
desperate indecision or streaking by in delirium. We
can create, observe, capture or choose to forget them.
Each one has the ability to lend itself to growth.
Each one is an occasion whether we accept it or not.
Moments blend together to form or destroy lives.
Biding time creates a moment. Distress, excitement,
creativity- molds a moment. Embracing time as a flow
of movement and movement only as opposed to
restricting contracts on a life can be the only
positive outlook. Or is it? Create to excel. Refuse
to and idleness may contaminate. Limitation may only
stifle and extinguish existence.

                              “ To undertake is to achieve”– Emily Dickinson.

Occasions mark themselves with tears, laughter or
outbursts. Condemning ourselves to limited moments
quelches the desire to better excel at our own being.
We delve deep into our past to receive future events
but are only left with the odor of failure. Trying to
reconstruct what has abandoned us in the past shows us
that the future may be limited if we rely on  past
moments for security and foundation. Past
outbursts were created in an undeserving time,
immature and before fruitation. Solemn and naive. We
value our childhood but hardly take responsibility.

–By Chelsea Lee, Guest Contributor for Poet Verse

September 10, 2009

Poetry Reading Kansas City, MO

I met John Olivares Espinoza while I was in residency at the Vermont Studio Center last November.  Today, he sent me a comment about his up-coming reading.  If you are in the Kansas City area, hearing John’s poetry would be a fabulous way to spend an evening.

The Latino Writers Collective presents The Wind Shifts: New Latino Poetry ON TOUR with editor Francisco Aragon, author of Puerta del Sol and director of the Institute of Latino Studies at Notre Dame University, with contributors Brenda Cardenas, author of Boomerang, and John Olivares Espinoza, author of Date Fruit Elegies. The Wind Shifts is the winner of the International Latino Book Award in Poetry. Reception and book signing to follow.

What: Latino Writers Collective Reading Series

When: September 23, 2009, 7:00

Where: Plaza Library, 4801 Main Street, Kansas City, MO

September 10, 2009

Word Of The Day

I had trouble with the last theme as whenever I would try to post, it would give me a failure error.

I hope you like the new look of Poet Verse.  To learn more about the photo-check out the Photo Header Page to your right.

Penitent • ADJ • regretful, remorseful

Had the man appeared penitent for his inappropriate behavior, his friends may have been more forgiving.

September 10, 2009

Cancion y Glosa

   Y yo, mientras, hijo

  tuyo, con mas secas

  hojas en las venas

         –Juan Ramon Jimenez

                           Among the almond trees

whiteness more than winter’s,

speech where no name is,

flowers broken from sleep;

and you their litany,

a breath upon this fervor,

you their reason, Lady,

seem as a name, meanwhile,

for an immortal season,

who stand in such whiteness

with those green leaves in your hands.

             There is no breath of days

in that time where I was,

in that place, through the trees;

no winds nor satellites,

seasons nor bodies rise;

are no descent of rivers,

wavering of fishes,

indecision of tides,

languor before pause,

nor any dance to please,

nor prayers, pleasure of knees,

coupling, smile of increase,

swaying of fruit and seas,

genesis, exodus,

tremor of arteries,

decay by calendars,

hum of carrion flies;

and no shadow-plays,

trepidation of fingers,

ruse of limbs or faces,

ghosts nor histories

shift before the eyes,

but that vain country lies

in savorless repose.

                Among the name of these,

yet as they eyes remove

now from the politics

of these disstated things,

I their artifice,

a breath among such languor,

I their name, Lady,

seem as one nameless, leaning

through such stillness meanwhile

with these dry leaves in my hands.

–By W.S. Merwin

September 8, 2009

Word Of The Day

Endemic• peculiar to a particular region• native, characteristic of a population• confined to a particular place• an endemic disease

September 8, 2009

Perfect Your Sentences/ Perfect Your Poetry

I have decided to review sentence construction in order to polish my poetry and composition skills.  I bought the book, The Art of Styling Sentences, by Longknife and Sullivan to serve as a primer.

I may share some of the information on Poet Verse as I think it could benefit readers in their writing endeavors.

I hope you had an awesome Labor Day weekend.  Have a great writing day!

September 8, 2009

Sounds

Sounds add texture to poetry and evoke emotional responses from the reader.  Think of poems you like, what kind of sounds do those poems employ?  How do those sounds make you feel?

How does one create sounds within poetry? 

By using these methods:

Assonance (Repeating Vowels)

The repetition of a vowel sound; green/weave, boat/remote, tray/sway, sickle/fickle.  Assonance gives poetry a playful or witty vibe and can also be used to suggest meanings between to words:  gowns/hand-me-downs.  Assonance makes poetry more musical.

How to experiment with assonance:

Avoid end rhymes

Use assonance within the line

Use assonance and rhyme

• There are no rules and limitations so let your imagination soar

Example:

The flutter of wings precedes a shadow

fleeing over bright leaves, greenly lit

 

with late afternoon.  Sporadic breezes ruffle

the hedge below the orange tree.

from “Late Afternoon at the Alhambra” by Diane Mehta

The ee sound is repeated six times:  precedes, fleeing, leaves, greenly, breezes, and trees.  It propels the poem forward while tying it together through the repeated ee sound.–Mehta

Alliteration (Repeat Consonants)

Consonant sounds are repeated at the beginning of words-examples:  crook, craggy, creek

**Too much alliteration can result in a tongue twister effect.

Consonance

The repetition of consonant sounds at the end of words-examples:  more/mirror, luck/rake

Consonance words do not always rhyme.

Try not to overdo it with anyone one thing when you’re writing.  Real mastery is in being subtle, not hitting your reader over the head with your style.  –Mehta

Onomatopoeia (Living Words)

Creates drama

purr, hiss, buzz, clunk,

Use instead of explaining what is happening.

Example:

Low gear:  the engine purred

Silly Sounds (Make sure your sounds are appropriate)

Words that begin with the letters B, D, P, G and F can be ridiculous when used multiple times because they are stops and break up flow.

Examples:  Hickory Dickory Dock

Rough Sounds

Explosive sounds that combine to create jarring, ugly words:  perverse, jerk

Sexy Sounds

Sexy and mellifluous:

 

Examples: sleek, meaner, glide, groove, surf, winding

If your words physically, audibly mimic what you’re trying to say, they actually back up what you are trying to convey.  –Mehta

How To Write Poetry by Diane Mehta

September 7, 2009

October Is My Favorite Month…

Today, I celebrate it!

October

O hushed October morning mild,
Thy leaves have ripened to the fall;
To-morrow's wind, if it be wild,
Should waste them all.
The crows above the forest call;
To-morrow they may form and go.
O hushed October morning mild,
Begin the hours of this day slow,
Make the day seem to us less brief.
Hearts not averse to being beguiled,
Beguile us in the way you know;
Release one leaf at break of day;
At noon release another leaf;
One from our trees, one far away;
Retard the sun with gentle mist;
Enchant the land with amethyst.
Slow, slow!
For the grapes' sake, if they were all,
Whose leaves already are burnt with frost,
Whose clustered fruit must else be lost-
For the grapes' sake along the wall.
By Robert Frost

September 7, 2009

Word Of The Day

Ingenious

ADJ

Clever•Resourceful

His ingenious use of almonds, rather than the cashews called for by the recipe, was lauded by members of his supper club, who found the dish to be elegant.

September 7, 2009

Quote For The Week

But I reckon I got to light out for the territory ahead of the rest, because Aunt Sally she’s going to adopt me and sivilize me, and I can’t stand it.  I been there before.

 Mark Twain, The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn

September 5, 2009

W*H*A*T?

Just because you buy a book, it doesn’t mean that the author knows everything there is about a subject.  Feel free to disagree with authors.  In school, I noticed many of my classmates lapping up teachers’ opinions and the opinions of authors.  Perhaps I was and remain a trouble maker…or perhaps….I like to decide things for myself.  Whatever the reason–my message is–respectfully disagreeing is what builds character and catapults the advancement of human thought.

Mehta, on page 5 of her book, How To Write Poetry, writes

There’s no right or wrong interpretation of a poem.

This is an extreme position that assumes poets do not fully understand what they create and that others cannot fully identify (common consensus) what the poet is trying to convey.

When I write, I am often surprised what bleeds through the process. I learn things about myself that perhaps I would not have learned had I not taken the time to explore my thoughts and feelings in a concise composition.  This does not mean that I write without a definite meaning and that any reader can decide for him or her self what the message of the poem is.  I write with a message.  All good writing conveys a message.  

   Poems without messages are fancy word florals that disintegrate into the crevices of readers’ minds where they lay dormant after the first initial impression of beauty has passed.

Keep that in mind (your mind) when reading a poem.

If the poem doesn’t have a message-it doesn’t grab your heart and soul-thus no loftiness or exaltation may occur.

Carolina Maine

September 5, 2009

Submit to Poet Verse

Got a poem you want to share?

Submit it to Poet Verse:

carolinamaine at gmail dot com

Put Subject Line:  Poetry Submission

Thanks for reading Poet Verse!

Happy Labor Day Weekend!

September 5, 2009

Styles of Poetry

Just as there are styles of art-there are styles of poetry.  Learning them gives you more ideas on how to create new canvases for your imagery and lofty thoughts.

Lyrical Poetry

Most new writers use this form.  Lyrical poetry is short and emotional.

Allegory

A poem in which characters represent ideas such as Death, Courage, or Innocence.

An example would be The Faerie Queene by Edmund Spenser.

Apostrophe

An address to an absent person or idea, such as Shakespeare’s “O judgment! thou art fled to brutish beasts!”

Confessional Poetry

Poetry whose subject is intimate or private.  Much of contemporary poetry is extremely confessional.

Dramatic Monologue

A poem in which the speaker delivers a speech, as though it’s a one-sided conversation.  Often, the speaker reveals key facts and telling details as he or she continues speaking.

Eclogue

A poem about a pastoral theme, such as farming, crops, the countryside, or the idealized world of shepherds.  Usually an eclogue takes the form of a dialogue.  In some cases a deeper meaning is hinted at such as our place in the universe or the human condition.  Eclogues are also referred to as bucolics.

Elegy

A mournful lament, usually written in honor of someone who has died.

Epic

A long, narrative style of poem that involves heroic subjects or characters, such as Homer’s The Odyssey or The Illiad.

Epigram

A short, witty poem that often makes a satiric observation.  It can be any length or style, as long as it’s brief-the key is that the tone is sharp-tongued.

Epistle

A poem written as though it’s a letter from one person to another.

Narrative Poetry

Poetry that tends to be long and involves a story, with characters and a plot.

Ode

A lyric form used for poems recited during public events.  An ode is dedicated to someone or in honor of something- a military victory, a safe return, a funeral, a birthday-or serves a praise to a friend or a god (or G-d).

Literal and Adapted version of Mehta’s How to Write Poetry

September 5, 2009

Word of the Day

What does every writer need?  An expansive vocabulary. 

Check Poet Verse daily for a Word of the Day!

Today’s word:

Trepidation • N • fear, apprehension

With great trepidation, I embarked on a journey into hostile lands-lands filled with war and bloodshed.

September 5, 2009

Poetry Definitions

Poetry

 po •e •try

 noun

writing that formulates a concentrated imaginative awareness of experience in language chosen and arranged to create a specific emotional response through meaning, sound, and rhythm

Mehta, Diane  How To Write Poetry Definition Taken From* Merriam-Webster’s Collegiate Dictionary

Poetry

(pō’i trē)

noun

 

1. the art of rhythmical composition, written or spoken, for exciting pleasure by beautiful, imaginative, or elevated thoughts.  2.  literary work in metrical form; verse.  3.  prose with poetic qualities.  4.  poetic qualities however manifested; the poetry of simple act and things.  5.  poetic spirit or feeling;  The pianist played the prelude with poetry.  6.  something suggestive of or likened to poetry:  the poetry of a beautiful view on a clear day.

Webster’s Encyclopedic Unabridged Dictionary Of The English Language

Which definition appeals to you?  Why?

September 4, 2009

Basics of Poetry

The main hits for my blog are those that pertain to poetry instruction so I decided to post basic lessons inspired or taken from the book, How to Write Poetry, by Diane Mehta.  Mehta acknowledges Robert Pinsky and Derek Walcott as “terrific teachers” who taught her “…how to think about poetry.” 

The book is basic, but I think it would make a great material contribution to Poet Verse and its readers.  So check back here often for tips on improving your poetry.

Have a great poetry writing day!

September 4, 2009

Quote For The Week

All we have to decide is what to do with the time that is given us.

     J.R.R. Tolkein, The Fellowship Of The Rings

September 2, 2009

Full Fellowships to Vermont Studio

I received an email from Vermont Studio Center about its full fellowships that are available in art/writing.

If you are interested, then please open the PDF.

VermontFellowships

September 2, 2009

Donald Hall

I’ve been reading Donald Hall’s collection of poems titled, White Apples and the Taste of Stone.  Hall was the Poet Laureate of the United States from 2006-2007.  I enjoy his writing ability and the way his poems are arranged. I do not, however, care for the amount of sensual poetry in this collection. I understand that sensual poetry has its place in the world, but I don’t care for it particularly.  I think it is because most of it deals with illicit sex and that is destructive to lives and families. I don’t think illicit sex is the most enjoyable form of sensuality or even the most desirable. However, there are plenty who disagree with me–as made obvious by the popularity of such poetry.

This poem, The Hard Man, is well written and indicates the type of poetry that I enjoy by Donald Hall.  I hope you enjoy it as much as I have:

The Hard Man

         My father wept easily,

laughed loudly when his friends teased him.

         and blustered like a basso-

but his father was “a hard man.”

         H.F. was strict, handsome,

silent, and severe.  When his stallion

        Skylark ran away

with my young uncle and threw him, H.F.

        galloped to a stop

beside his son’s body, bellowing, “Are

         you trying to kill

the horse?”  I remember the time we called

         on H.F. after church

to find him sitting upright, staring

         straight ahead without

expression, as my uncle cut his boot

         away with the carving

knife that sliced white and dark at Christmas;

          I remember the leather

curling like a black rose petal.

          That morning Skylark

slipped on clear ice that H.F. neglected

           to notice, and the horse,

falling, rolled on his leg.  Jagged pink

            bone was sticking out

through H.F.’s paper-white leg skin as he

             sat stiff, resolute,

without complaint or excuse for error.

September 1, 2009

Colorado Poetry Scene

I’m not sure about my new home state.  Beautiful it may be, but it is also curiously liberal. I find the poetry scene to be a bit “earthy” for my aesthetic.  It is not that I mind nature poetry, it is that it seems to dominate this state like the Rockies dominate the skyline.

I’ve been researching the poetry groups here, and I haven’t found one that I am sure I would “fit into” which is somewhat of a disappointment.

I have thought about starting my own group.  I’ll have to think about it.

I don’t know anyone here so that might pose a challenge–though–I do have a sense of where to begin.

So keep reading….the poetry here is ecletic.

Here is a poem from Colorado poet,  Luis  Lopez :

Images of San Luis

Often of late

And far from this poor

Tin-roofed-made-to-look-like adobe church

 

I have seen a votive candle burn in a red glass

 

Sole illumination in this dark corner

Of a chipped plaster image

Of San Luis  de Gonzaga

Church patron

Standing two feet high

Yellowing surplice over faded black cassock

 

Eyes downcast, seeking heaven

 

This is where my father stood to make his peace

When times were difficult to

Ask forgiveness  of stubborn sin through his namesake

 

And where I now stand

Drawn from afar to make my difficult peace

With the memory

Of his tobacco and whiskey breath

Luis Lopez is a native of Albuquerque, New Mexico, and teaches  in the English Department at Mesa State College in Grand Junction, Colorado.

This poem appeals to me on various levels. I love the way Lopez uses sparse descriptions to advance a profound and vivid memory/period in time. I dislike heavily laden poetry that destroys the beauty of poetry’s dense brevity.

September 1, 2009

The $25 Haiku

This morning as I sipped my grande chai latte (the only thing I drink at Starbucks), I also flipped through this morning’s Denver Post. Evidently, they have some sort of Haiku contest.  This week’s winner, David K. Cowles,debuted a Haiku poem about football.  Really?  Seriously?

Being southern, I am a bit surprised by a football poem.  Most fellas back home who are football fans/players don’t really dig poetry. 

Throwing my snootiness aside, I will post his Haiku poem here if you are interested.  Leave your thoughts if so inclined.

Precision passes

Jarring tackles, victory

measured in inches.

So what do you think about football Haiku?  Yay or Nay?

If you live in CO, you may submit your Haiku poems to:  lifestyle at denverpost dot com

To read more www.denverpost.com/haiku (Link Button would not work with address…sorry for inconvenience)

This week’s topic: Chile Peppers

So if you are interested in submitting–get to thinking and writing!

I’ve never written Haiku so….I’m probably not entering.

Good luck and Good writing:)

Editor’s Critique of Cowle’s Haiku:

While it is certainly vivid, I think jarring tackles and victory should not be on the same line…thinking something like:

Precision Passes  (denotes intelligent strategy of the game)

Defying tackles, victory (denotes a plan-either side tries to evade being tackled)

measured in inches (more intelligent strategy)

I think the word jarring was ruining it for me. But that is just my opinion:) Feel free to leave yours…

August 31, 2009

Bomi, A powerful poet for South African women…

Women’s Month is celebrated during August in South Africa, as it marks the anniversary of the great Women’s March of 1956, where about 20 000 women marched to the Union Buildings in Pretoria to protest against the carrying of pass books (a document to prove that they were allowed to enter a ‘white area’), which was legislation aimed at tightening the apartheid government’s control over the movement of black women in urban areas. This march was on 9 August 1956, now an annual public holiday. Last year I was invited to do a reading in Parliament. It was truly an honour to be able to celebrate our women leaders in such a place of power.

I am truly in awe of Bomi’s talent.  Her poetry is powerful, spiritual, intimate, and celebratory of the human condition.

This quote was taken from her blog and followed the poem:  Their Souls Ignited.  If you haven’t read it yet-you haven’t experienced the beauty and power that is Bomi’s poetry and elegance!

Thanks, Bomi, for all your inspirational and educational posts:)

August 31, 2009

Cool Art Blog/Submissions

This is a cool blog by an artist in Michigan named, Deborah Larson King.  Her posts are funny and vibrant.  Check her site out here: Indigo Jones Studio

Yeah, Yeah, I know it is not a poetry site or a fiction site-but it is fun nonetheless.  You will also find it in my linkroll.

Enjoy!

If you would like to submit poetry to Poet Verse for a Guest Highlight, please email me at:

carolinamaine at gmail dot com

Thanks for reading Poet Verse!!

August 29, 2009

Is Poetry Readership Dying?

I noticed this as I have perused several shrinking poetry sections in bookstores in various U.S. cities and states.

Give this article a quick read and leave your thoughts here if you wish:

The End of Verse?

August 29, 2009

Guest Poet Featured, Ray Sharp

 
Baghdad
 

 
Everyone had this strange compulsion
to stand still a moment in the street
and listen
 
because they were convinced
that the tautness could not go on
indefinitely
 
that some day something had to happen 
that much was certain but what form
the release
 
might take could only be guessed at
and lying out on the roof at night
under the stars
 
he would strain his ears trying to imagine
he could hear perhaps in the direction
of Arbataash
 
the faint sound of voices calling
but it was always the presence
of silence
 
broken now and then by a sleepy rooster
crowing on some distant housetop
or a cat
 
wailing in the street below or a truck
far out on Mosul Road
backfiring
 
bang bang as it coasted
down the long hill toward the Tigris
fertile old giver of life.

By Ray Sharp
 Unauthorized Use Is Prohibited
Ray Sharp works in public health, writes poems, bikes and skis in Michigan’s rural, rugged and remote western Upper Peninsula region. Sharp studied Spanish-language poetry in college, and has been writing poetry in his native English for some 15 years. For more of Ray’s poems, visit www.raysharp.wordpress.com

Editor’s Note:  I was not able to link to Ray Sharp’s site using the link application so I put his web address here instead. There must be a WP glitch today as I have never encountered this problem before. Thanks.

August 24, 2009

Silence

Silence

Like the one before the world was created

 

Fog slides over the river

Tangles in bushes on shore

 

Dew trembles on a branch

A bud bursts open

A fledgling moves in a nest

 

Silence

Like the one before the first word was spoken

 

Church bells like their lips

 

By Ronalds Briedis Translated from the Latvian by Margita Gailitis and J.C. Todd

August 23, 2009

The First Night La Premiere nuit

Night falls, soothing to lascivious old men

My cat, Murr, hunched like some heraldic sphinx,

Uneasily surveys, from his fantastic eyeball,

The gradual ascent of the chlorotic moon.

 

The hour of children’s prayers, when whoring Paris

Hurls on to the pavement of every boulevard

Her cold-breasted girls, who wander with searching

Animal eyes under the pale street lights.

 

With my cat, Murr, I meditate at my window,

I think of the newborn everywhere;

I think of the dead who were buried today.

 

I imagine myself within the cemetary,

Entering the tombs, going in place

Of those who will spend their first night there.

by Jules LaForge  Translated by the French  by William Jay Smith

August 22, 2009

Thoughts/Insecurities Of A Writer

I would like to thank everyone who commented on my earlier post as it helped me to put things into perspective.  I am the kind of person who puts 100% into an activity.  When I feel like I can no longer put in that amount of work, I abandon the project.  I have had to realize that perhaps 100% could be divided up over multiple days–allowing me to post less frequently-but post nonetheless.

Moving has been a little difficult for me as I have not had any time to think, meditate, and write.  My husband has been away training for many longs weeks now.  Being in a new area is isolating and it tends to wear on me as I am a very social person.  I think my despondency about blogging grew out of the feelings of loneliness that I have currently experienced. 

My trip to Vermont last December taught me that perhaps I have been taking the wrong route with my writing.  I enjoyed meeting wonderful people in Vermont, but I felt out of place there and began to question my abilities as a writer. 

Perhaps this is too personal for a blog, but I am sure other writers reach a point in their lives where they re-evaluate their progress and chosen path and wonder if they are progressing or if another path will lead to greater spiritual happiness through the exercise of writing.

I think I have decided to focus on my progress in spiritual development and work on encouraging others to take time to focus on their chosen spiritual progress as well.

Thank you for your support and suggestions.

Carolina Maine

August 19, 2009

Quit Poet Verse

I am considering shutting down Poet Verse.  I haven’t had the time to put as much effort into it as I once did.  I miss all my old comments as well.

I will post before deciding whether or not to pull the plug.

Thanks for reading.

August 3, 2009

Moved To A New State

I have been offline because I have just arrived in a new state that we are planning on living in long-term.  I do not have Internet access yet so my postings have been sparse if non-existent.  I look forward to contributing more to Poet Verse around the end of August and early September.  If you would like to be considered for having your poem published on Poet Verse please send me an email to carolinamaine at gmail dot com.  Please also include a short bio.

Thank you for reading Poet Verse!

July 10, 2009

Astoria, Queens. July 2001

Chelsea Lee Copyright 2009 Unauthorized Use prohibited

Chelsea Lee Copyright 2009 Unauthorized Use prohibited

 

This piece was written the summer I moved in with an ethnomusicologist and spent a lot of time listening to avante-garde jazz and seeing shows at The Tonic.  Only years later did I learn tonic was something other than to mix my vodka or gin with.  So, Cheers to Brooklyn, and Cheers to Shane for making that summer worthwhile. 

 

It has been an unconscious attempt of self that I have fallen into,  about, and around you.  In my own actual self realization, it has not been that I exist as a being, but rather an inanimate object of your affection.  It is through this vessel I become closer, (a part), to you.  We sit listen, confide, appreciate, and become as modulation of music tonality.  It is when i confer with my self in this essence of music that I become you.  There is a piece, a work of art actually, that you and I side by side indulge.  It is within this moment when you reach for an instrument, a piece, a plectron, any sort of accompaniment, This is when I am transformed.  I become any bediam between your fingers and the instrument.  And when it is my song you play- I lapse all the more into an enlightented stage of being; love.  I am what you have picked up and determined as the vessel.  I am held in a lapse of reality only to find myself trapped within you.  To me, to me, this is love.  This is my soul released in to you.  

July 10, 2009

Introducing a Contributing Writer…

Chelsea Lee will be contributing occasionally to Poet Verse.  I hope you enjoy.

–Carolina Maine

July 10, 2009

Morning

Matin

     Yet now I think I have finished the tale of my inferno.

And inferno it was; the old one, whose gates the Son of Man flung open.

      From the same desert, on the same night, my eyes still awake to the silvery star, still, as the Kings of life, the Three Magi, heart, soul, and mind sleep untroubled.  When shall we go beyond shores and mountains, to greet the birth of new labors, the new wisdom, the putting to flight of tyrants and demons, the end of superstition, and worship–the very first!–Noel on earth.

       The song of the skies, the march of peoples!  Slaves, let us not curse life.

–by Arthur Rimbaud

Translated from the French by William M. Davis

July 10, 2009

Before Addressing the People

What strikes me about this poem is the last line, “His open mouth a zero.”  The prophet journeys back to deliver a message but freezes upon seeing his open mouth in the well–

I have realized that life’s epiphanies and perhaps even prophecies are more intimate and powerful if never spoken…they tend to bind the person to G-d.  We all have them–little moments where we gain insight into our lives–moments that rush our bloodstreams with the passion to announce our findings to the world.  We prepare to announce and share—oftentimes we realize that the gift is better kept private and shown through a change in our behavior and attitude toward life and the people in our lives–rather than an announcement from an open and void mouth.

Before Addressing the People

Before addressing the people

The prophet on return from the desert

Bends over the well

To quench his thirst

But freezes

When he sees his reflection–

His open mouth a zero

–by Ronalds Briedis (Latvia)

Translated from the Latvian by Margita Gailitis and J.C. Todd

July 5, 2009

Calling Guest Writers

If you would like to be featured as a guest writer on Poet Verse, please submit your work after visiting the Submissions page.

Thanks,

Carolina Maine

July 5, 2009

A Hot Stagnant Evening

It is a definite possibility that more of  William Jay Smith’s poetry will be featured on Poet Verse.  His style is exciting and I love the intricate yet unusual images he weaves into his works.  I chose this poem since I will be moving out further west–again.  I once lived in Las Vegas and hated the evenings because, unlike southern evenings, the air remained dry.  Evenings out west lack the dewy wetness of a southern evening.  In the south, evenings are a reward for braving the sweltering heat.  Out west–the landscape as well as the air is intolerant of human life, or rather, the life of amphibious humans.

Enjoy:

A HOT STAGNANT EVENING

Apres-diner torride et stagnante

     One’s feet are baking, one can feel the arteries throbbing in one’s ankles, under one’s chin, in the heart, the wrists;one raises up hands that are already swollen and wet, the least little meal weighs one down, one must undo one’s necktie, one breathes so deeply that the cigarette stuck to the corner of one’s mouth is consumed in twelve puffs, one’s skin is wringing wet…How unhappy I would be if I had breasts and were a nurse!  Or if I were one of those military musicians laced tight in a uniform, and had to blow into a trombone in some bandstand.  Ah, to be a fly on the wet tile floor of some provincial kitchen!  Or rather a passive sponge, a branch of coral encrusted at the bottom of the sea, watching the parade of submarine nature, or a blue cornflower on a piece of deft china perched above a pile of stoles, in the cool, dark back room of an antique shop on the banks of the Sequana!  Or a flower in the chintz of the bare prim parlor of an old maid in Quimper. . . or a heron. . .

–William Jay Smith

My favorite passage is highlighted.

July 3, 2009

My Aging Body by Carolina Maine

THIS IS A TIME SENSITVE POST AND WILL BE REMOVED IN 48 HOURS.  THANKS:)

I wrote this a while ago, but I was too shy to share it.  I know you have wanted some of my poetry online–so here it is. 

I hope it is satisfactory:) Blush:)

“My Aging Body” by Carolina Maine Copyright 2009 Unauthorized use of this poem is prohibited.

–Carolina Maine

July 3, 2009

I’m getting my move on…

I will be moving soon, but I plan to post frequently.

So-keep checking.

And thanks for all the encouraging messages to keep blogging!

HAPPY INDEPENDENCE DAY WEEKEND!!

May 24, 2009

The End Of A Day In The Provinces by Jules Laforgue

Fin de journee en province

Passed the end of a day in the provinces.

A gray sort of town, carefully paved, peaceful.

The hotel window looks onto the main square.  I watched

a stupid moon rise over there, lighting up this town especially

as though to assure me that this town really existed,

in its insignificance.

      A lamplighter carrying a baby in his arms followed by a dog who seemed to be used to everything, and who sniffed at the pavements as though they were very old friends.

      The lamp did not want to light.

       Immediately, two, five, six people came along and discussed it; the lamp lights, the people see that it is lit and go away slowly.  Only one remains.  He looks at the lamp for a moment and then he goes away.

      Oh!  to live in one of these mollusc beds!

      To die!….to die.

      And the moon is the same here as in Paris, as over the Mississippi, as in Bombay.

Translated from French by Margaret Crosland

May 23, 2009

Summer Reading List 1

Christian Friendship in the Fourth Century by Carolinne White. 

A History of Christian-Latin Poetry From the Beginnings to the Close of the Middle Ages by F.J.E. Raby

Grace is Where I Live The Landscape of Faith and Writing by John Leax

Sacred Doorways A Beginner’s Guide to Icons by Linette Martin

The Red Tent by Anita Diamant

One Hundered Years of Solitude by Gabriel Garcia Marquez

The Anchor Anthology of French Poetry From Nerval to Valery in English Translation Edited by Angel Flores

I have begun reading nearly all of these books and love them so far!

May 23, 2009

Sainte by Stephane Mallarme

At the window ledge concealing

The ancient sandalwood gold-flaking

Of her viol dimly twinkling

Long ago with flute or mandore,

 

Stands the pallid Saint displaying

The ancient missal page unfolding

At the Magnificat outpouring

Long ago for vesper and compline:

 

At that monstrance glazing lightly

Brushed now by a harp the Angel

Fashioned in his evening flight

Just for the delicate finger

 

Tip which, lacking the ancient missal

Or ancient sandalwood, she poises

On the instrumental plumage,

Musician of silences

Translated from the French by Hubert Creekmore

May 17, 2009

Highlighted Poem

I have, in the past, highlighed poems on other blogs that I have found to be outstanding.  “Holden” by Bryan Borland.  Check it out when you have the opportunity.

May 16, 2009

Song of the Ill by Marcin Swietlicki

I slept through all the carnival, delirious.

I couldn’t bear the drums, pipes, burning puppets.

Today, the carnival’s over,

postmodernism begins.

I fiddle with the radio.  This archetypal

scan of the wavelength can be performed

ad infinitum.  Inside me

I have a little God, I tend

 

this scrap,

scab.

Translated from the Polish by Elzbieta Wojcik-Leese

May 16, 2009

Arava Review is Accepting Submissions

First, I would like to thank Tova Gardner, a fellow poet whom I met at Vermont Studio, for sharing her new literary journal link with me.  Tova is a talented poet, and I was going to write an introduction for her, but hers is so much better:

Tova Gardner is a young Israeli poet. She has twice received Artist Grants from Vermont Studio Center where she studied with poet Kevin Young and will study with poet and Poetry Editor of Lilith Magazine, Marge Piercy. Her poems have appeared in Global Tapestry, Obsessed With Pipework, Dislocate Literary Journal, California Quarterly and Poeticamagazine. She is currently working on her first collection of poems.

If you have work in the areas of fiction, poetry, visual art, and fact, please send your submissions to the Arava Review.

April 17, 2009

PBS Poetry Everywhere

Sorry, I haven’t blogged in a while.  I am adjusting to being employed and being a mother at the same time.  I look forward to posting more often.  Here is the email I received about the PBS’ Poetry Everywhere special:

As someone who blogs about poetry and may write poetry yourself, I thought this special feature may be of interest to you and your readers.  I hope that you will pass this information along. 

 

I am writing to let you know that PBS Engage is featuring Poetry Everywhere’s Executive Producer Brigid Sullivan, as part of the ongoing PBS Engage series called “Five Good Questions.” The series features a PBS celebrity or insider and asks visitors to send in questions to be answered the following week.  The blog series has been very successful and we are thrilled to have Ms. Sullivan as our feature this week.

 

 

This is a chance for you to ask any questions you may have about PBS’s Poetry Everywhere site, WGBH, or whatever else is on your mind.  We’ll pick five questions for Brigit to answer and post her responses next week on the Engage blog.

 

Please visit the link and post your comments and questions here: http://www.pbs.org/engage/blog/ask-%E2%80%9Cpoetry-everywhere%E2%80%9D-executive-producer-brigid-sullivan-your-questions

 

You can also visit PBS Engage at www.pbs.org/engage and follow us on Twitter at http://twitter.com/pbsengage

 

Thank you!

  

Amy R. Baroch

Sr. Project Manager

PBS Engage

 

Twitter: amyPBS

www.pbs.org/engage

February 24, 2009

Experiments in Poetry and Personal “Stuff”

I have always written Confession types of poems so I am trying to do things that are more narrative.  I’m not sure that I am doing very well at it.  I mainly read about events and try to imagine that I am there and experiencing those events when I am writing.

I didn’t really get a response from the last poem I posted and it really was odd since I normally get comments on my work.  I am guessing that it was a flop and you are all too nice to tell me.

That is okay.  Everyone has a flop at some point.

Now–for the  personal  “stuff”:

I went to eat with my family at  Cracker Barrel–my favorite place to go now that I am a displaced southerner.  I saw a man at the table right next to ours who looked like he could be the twin of a man I once knew and loved dearly.  It was unsettling-the resemblance–even down to his profile and nose. His hair was even cut in the same way.

I had the urge to walk up to him and apologize for staring at him–I wanted to tell him that he looked like someone I once knew.  But I didn’t.

Ever so often, I see someone who looks like one of my late grandparents or someone I have loved dearly in my life. I always want to tell the person how much they look like my loved one, but I never do.

I don’t know…..I just thought I would share.

It is a reflective night.

Enjoy your writing!

February 8, 2009

War-a poem of beautiful imagery

I love this poem. It is by a poet named Semezdin Mehmedinovic from Bosnia and Herzegovina. 

War

and nothing is going on–

I go into town to beg for cigarettes

I’ve always known your scent

but you’ve never been closer–

sometimes when it’s cold in the morning you

put my underwear on by mistake

in ten years we haven’t been together as much

as we have these five months–

now you’ve got my sweater on all day

your joy

at the packets of humanitarian aid

makes me happy and sad at the same time

and I ask myself:  where on earth do

you find us coffee every night?

There isn’t a single pane of glass left in our windows

and there’s just no way to get rid

of the lagging flies

translated from the Bosnian by Ammiel Alcalay.

January 12, 2009

Left Eye Losing Sight

John Olivares Espinoza is a friend of mine, and he sent me his new book, The Date Fruit Elegies.  Today, I read “Left Eye Losing Sight”, and I truly admired his writing gifts and talents.  It inspired me to get back online.  I have been offline due to illness.

I love this poem, and I hope that you enoy it as much as I do:

As the sight in my left eye

Worsens each year,

The other gets sharper.

My right eye

Tells the other,

Do not fret

I’ll watch over you

Like a little brother

***

When I shut my right eye

The world loses all detail:

People become traces

Of themselves, souls of what

Once fitted flesh;

Ghosts whose

World I have entered

Without earning my death

***

I had an uncle

Who had gone

Completely blind

By the time he was fifty.

The first and only

Time I met him

I was eleven

And asked,

What do you see

When you’re blind?

Nothing, he answered back

Do you see black?

He said, Not even that.

***

My grandfather slept with a revolver

                                      Under his pillow.

Once, he unloaded it,

                Held the rounds like a set of teeth.

He handed the pistol to my young brother

And he inspected

                   Each curve

As if it were a woman’s sleeping body

Before my brother handed me the gun

The barrel glared right at me–

I stared into its one black eye

And flinched.

***
Shut one eye as you read

Or hear this.

What do you see out of the sealed eye?

Now imagine it in both eyes.

Now do you understand my uncle?

–John Olivares Espinoza Pages 40-41 from The Date Fruit Elegies

December 14, 2008

Imagist Poetry

-Formulated about 1912 by Ezra Pound

-American and English poets

-Aim=clarity of expression through the use of precise visual images

-Succinct verse of dry clarity and hard outline

-Exact visual image made a total poetic statement

-Imagism sought analogy with sculpture unlike French Symbolism Movement (affinity with music)

-1914 Pound moved to Vorticism

-From Imagist Manifesto:

-the use of language of common speech-no decorative words

-free verse epxresses individuality-a new cadence means a new idea

-absolute freedom in subject choice

-to present an image

-poetry should render particulars exactly and not deal in vague generalities

-oppose the cosmic poet who shirks the real difficulties of his art

-produce poetry that is hard and clear-never blurred or indefinite

-concentration=essence of  poetry

Imagist Poets

Ezra Pound

Amy Lowell

Hilda Doolittle

Richard Aldington

F.S. Flint

Inspired by the critical views of T.E. Hulme who revolted against the careless thinking and Romantic optimism he saw prevailing.

December 13, 2008

Notes on Victorian Poetry and Poets

Period that describes the events in Queen Victoria’s reign (1837-1901)

-increased use of sonnet form-influenced modern poets

-Poets in the Victorian Period were influenced by the Romantic Poets

-The Victorian Period saw the emergence of many important female poets.

-Victorian poetry provided the link between the Romantic and the Modern Poets

Victorian Poets:

Matthew Arnold

Charlotte Bronte

Emily Bronte

Elizabeth Browning

Robert Browning

Gerard Manley Hopkins

Rudyard Kipling

Christina Rossetti

Dante Gabriella Rossetti

Alfred Tennyson

Oscar Wilde

Ralph Waldo Emerson

December 13, 2008

What is Ekphrastic Poetry?

Ekphrastic poetry is created when a poet interprets a work of visual art and then creates a narrative in verse form that represents his or her reaction to that painting, photograph, sculpture, or other artistic tradition.

December 13, 2008

[The rain brings me back] by Patrizia Cavalli

The rain brings me back

the dispersed pieces

of my friends, it presses down

flights too high, it slows down escapes and closes

on the side of the windows, finally,

time.

translated from the Italian by Judith Baumel

December 6, 2008

The Date Fruit Elegies by John O. Espinoza is published and available

December 5, 2008

David Gascoyne’s Surrealist Poem “The Cage”

The Cage

In the waking night
The forests have stopped growing
The shells are listening
The shadows in the pools turn grey
The pearls dissolve in the shadow
And I return to you

Your face is marked upon the clockface
My hands are beneath your hair
And if the time you mark sets free the birds
And if they fly away towards the forest
The hour will no longer be ours

Ours in the ornate birdcage
The brimming cup of water
The preface to the book
And all the clocks are ticking
All the dark rooms are moving
All the air’s nerves are bare

Once flown
The feathered hour will not return
And I shall have gone away.

by David Gascoyne

December 5, 2008

Surrealist Poetry

I tried to convert my PDF notes on Surrealist Poetry to Word, but it was rife with errors and symbols.

Hope you don’t mind the PDF version.  Also listed in the notes are Surrealist-inspired and Surrealist Poets.

surrealism2

December 3, 2008

My Reading at Vermont Studio Center

John Olivares Espinoza put photos up on his blog of the last night of poetry readings by residents at Vermont Studio Center while we were there.

I am going to block quote this directly from his blog and provide a link to the photos below:

Resident Reading 2

Tuesday, November 25th, 2008

Here are some shots of our second resident readers.

Photo 1: Beaudeline from Haiti

Photo 2: Steve Godwin

Photo 3: Phillip Osgood

Photo 4: Carolina Maine

Today is Tuesday which means the fresh batch of VSC residents will be reading tonight. Good luck to them!

To see photos click this link:  John Olivares Twenty-five Cent Stories Blog

December 3, 2008

Poetry by Luis Garcia Montero (b. 1958)

Poetry

Poetry is useless, it serves only

to behead a king

or seduce a young woman.

 

Perhaps it serves also,

if water is death

to part the water with a dream

And if time grants us its unique matter,

it serves possible as a blade,

because a clean cut is better

when we open memory’s skin.

With broken glass

desire

leaves ragged wounds.

 

You are poetry

a clean cut,

a part in the water

-if water is teh reason for existence-,

the woman who submits to seduction

in order to behead a king.

Luis Garcia Montero Translated from Spanish by Katie King.

Miller, Wayne & Prufer, Kevin.  2008.  New European Poets.  Graywolf Press, St. Paul, Minnesota, P. 13.

December 3, 2008

Research Papers and Holiday Reading List

I haven’t been blogging that much because I have been writing research papers and preparing for the end of this semester.

Since I only have a final examination remaining–I have picked up a few books to read over the holidays.

They are:

The Center Cannot Hold:  My Journey Through Madness by Elyn R. Saks (I think the title was too long to make the entire title a link.)

&

How To Write The Story Of Your Life by Frank P. Thomas (memoir guide)

November 30, 2008

I hate Homework!

My daughter says she hates homework. She has excellent grades and seems to like school so I would have never guessed her to feel this way.  I gave her a book of poetry, A Child’s Anthology of Poetry edited by Elizabeth Hauge Sword.

My daughter’s favorite poem is on page 221, “Homework! Oh, Homework!” by Jack Prelutsky.

I scanned a copy below. I just learned that I can save PDF to JPEG (wow!).

Saves time typing.

I COULD NOT GET THE JPEG IMAGE SMALL ENOUGH TO POST SO I WILL HAVE TO POST IN PDF. 

Click on the link below to read the poem:

Homework! Oh, Homework! by Jack Prelutsky

November 24, 2008

Confessional Movement in Poetry

Short notes of only 1 page.

I have found that it is easier to scan my notebook than to take time typing my notes out into blog posts.

The file is in PDF.

Confessional Movement in Poetry Notes by Carolina Maine

November 24, 2008

Winter Winds Brutal by Carolina Maine

This poem is in PDF format, and this post will stay fully active until tomorrow, Tuesday, morning.

Preview has been removed.

Thanks for reading!

November 24, 2008

Great Book On Novels

I am reading

How to Read Novels Like a Professor by Thomas C. Foster.

I actually bought EM Forster’s book Aspects of the Novel along with Foster’s book, but I decided to take it back since I really didn’t have much time to enjoy Forster’s winding language. 

If you want a book that is solid, to the point, and provides good examples then you should definitely pick up a copy of How to Read Novels Like a Professor

If you want to write a novel that is highly literary then choose Forster’s Aspect of the Novel.

November 23, 2008

Notes on Modernist Poetry

I made some notes about Modernist Poetry.  I am starting to write in print in my notebook so that the scanned result is of better quality.  This PDF is in cursive, but I think it is still legible.  My cursive handwriting is generally pretty bad.

Please click the link below-file is in Adobe PDF.

ModernistPoetryandPoets

November 23, 2008

Vermont Studio Group Photo

Some of my friends do not have copies of the group photo so I am providing it on my blog.  I can’t scan to anything but Adobe because my scanner is old.

The photograph was taken by Howard Romero.

vermontgroupphoto

November 23, 2008

Back from Vermont Studio Center

I had a great time at Vermont Studio Center (VSC).  I met  poet, Kevin Young, during a craft talk.  He is a nice person and down-to-earth.  His new book is titled Dear Darkness.  I bought a copy while I was in Vermont, but I gave it to a friend who was collecting all of his books.  Otherwise, I would share a poem or two from his latest collection.

While at VSC I had a desk in a writing studio.  The experience taught me that I need to make a place in my home-a place just for writing.  Yesterday, I went out and purchased some tables and a chair to make up my writing space.  I also bought my children a large table for their art.  Our downstairs area has been turned into a family studio.  It was a great idea.  I’m settling in today-answering emails about my trip and posting to my blog.

I am sad that my poetry has been copied from this site and put on objectionable sites.  I even clean up poems (by other poets) that I have posted on my blog from other such sites.  I think it is a responsible thing to do as a blog owner.  I post poems on here by other writers that are enjoyable and educational.  If my poems were on such a site, I would not mind, but next to Viagra ads–that just steams me.

I do think Poet Verse can be an enjoyable blog still.  I will keep sharing poems that are good examples of poetry, and I will post my notes about the various poetic movements.

Thanks for reading!

November 2, 2008

The Art of Poetry Canto I by Nicolas Boileau Despreaux

Canto I.
Rash Author, ’tis a vain presumptuous Crime
To undertake the Sacred Art of Rhyme ;
If at thy Birth the Stars that rul’d thy Sence
Shone not with a Poetic Influence :
In thy strait Genius thou wilt still be bound,
Find Phoebus deaf, and Pegasus unsound.
You then, that burn with the desire to try
The dangerous Course of charming Poetry ;
Forbear in fruitless Verse to lose your time,
Or take for Genius the desire of Rhyme :
Fear the allurements of a specious Bait,
And well consider your own Force and Weight.
Nature abounds in Wits of every kind,
And for each Author can a Talent find :
One may in Verse describe an Amorous Flame,
Another sharpen a short Epigram :

Excerpt from The Art of Poetry by Nicolas Boileau Despreaux 1636-1711